I think that's the exact same as the first one? Sorry if I wasn't clear.
I wasn't making a suggestion of what it should be changed to, I was
showing the weirdness.
I think just getting moving the "if" to before the "when" should work.
On 12/15/2018 4:22 PM, Reuben Staley wrote:
ttttpf
On 12/15/18 2:21 PM, Reuben Staley wrote:
I retract the last one and submit this one:
Title: Happy Birthday To You Author: Trigon Coauthors: ATMunn AI:
1
Enact a new rule entitled "Birthday Gifts", power=1, with the
text: It is considered to be a player's Agoran Birthday when on
the Agoran day e registered, if it is also a different Agoran
year. Exactly once each time it is a player's Agoran Birthday, any
other player CAN grant em 3 coins by announcement.
Players SHOULD announce their Agoran Birthdays.
On 12/15/18 2:10 PM, ATMunn wrote:
The first sentence doesn't seem to make sense grammatically. "It
is considered ... when on the Agoran day e registered, if ..."
On 12/15/2018 3:09 PM, Reuben Staley wrote:
I am not sure if this is better, but whatever.
I submit the following proposal.
Title: Happy Birthday To You Author: Trigon Coauthors: AI: 1
Enact a new rule entitled "Birthday Gifts", power=1, with the
text:
It is considered to be a player's Agoran Birthday when on the
Agoran day e registered, if it is also a different Agoran
year. Exactly once each time it is a player's Agoran Birthday,
any other player CAN grant em 3 coins by announcement.
Players SHOULD announce their Agoran Birthdays.
