On 09/22/17 19:46, Owen Jacobson wrote:
> I noticed a significant mechanical defect and a style defect after I pended
> it, so I withdraw the proposal “Make Your Home Shine” and submit the
> following proposal in its place. This time, for sure!
>
> Title: Make Your Home Shine
> Author: o
> Co-authors: CuddleBeam, Ørjan, V.J Rada
> AI: 1.7
>
> {{{
> This proposal CANNOT create a pledge, other than via clauses that begin
> "Create
> a pledge".
>
> Amend rule 2450 ("Pledges") to read, in full:
>
> {
> Pledges are an indestructible fixed asset. Ownership of pledges
> is restricted to persons. The Referee is the recordkeepor of
> pledges. Creating, destroying, modifying, and transferring
> pledges are secured.
>
> To "pledge" something is to create a pledge with those terms. A
> person CAN pledge by announcement to create a pledge e owns.
>
> To "retract" (syn "withdraw") a pledge is to destroy it. A
> person CAN retract a pledge e owns without objection.
>
> To "call in" a pledge" is to destroy it. A player can call in
> any pledge with Agoran Consent, if e announces a reason the
> Terms of the pledge should be considered broken. Support for an
> intent to call in a pledge is INEFFECTIVE unless the supporting
> player explicitly confirms the reasons that the pledge should
> be considered broken.
>
> It is ILLEGAL to own a pledge when it is called in.
Should be uppercase CAN in "A player can call in" I think. Also should
there be MAYs? I'm still confused about that.
Otherwise I *think* you've done as much as possible to make this
airtight. My main concern is that Agora will eventually somehow own a
pledge, which appears to be transferable regardless of the 'fixed'
property. Also, I am curious about the implications of Agora doing
something ILLEGAL.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by Quazie, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge to give 1 Shiny to the first person who can,
> correctly, with e-mail citations, explain what I did wrong on
> Jan 20th 2009 that has since led to me being a fugitive. For
> the explanation to be valid for this pledge, it should be fully
> self contained, I should not have to go look up past rules in
> order to understand the explanation (So please, include all
> source info in the explanation).
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by V.J Rada, whose terms are
>
> {
> However I now pledge to include more recapping of agoran events
> in future newspapers.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by V.J Rada, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge not to make any thread titles completely unrelated to
> the email's content, nor use any agency or other mechanism to
> attempt to gain control of any player at the exclusion of all
> other players.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by o, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge that, for the next month, if I have not yet paid a
> total of 30 shinies under this pledge, and a player pledges to
> pay me 6 Shinies within a month, I will pay em 5 Shinies in a
> timely fashion.
> }
>
> Ratify the following statement:
>
> {
> The only pledge owned by o was created on Aug 23, 2017.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by Gaelan, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge to, for at least the next month, vote AGAINST any
> proposal that amends rules by providing new text in full unless
> the text of the rule is nearly entirely changed.
> }
>
> Ratify the following statement:
>
> {
> The only pledge owned by Gaelan was created on Sep 14, 2017.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by nichdel, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge to vote AGAINST on all proposals created or pended by
> Cuddle Beam.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by nichdel, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge to Object to all intentions by Cuddle Beam that I can
> object to.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by nichdel, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge to not acknowledge any messages Cuddle Beam sends to
> a-d, or to respond in a-d to anything CB does.
> }
I already broke this pledge, which I believe makes it impossible for me
to be punished for it again. Thus this is equivalent to remaking the
pledge for me.
>
> Create a pledge owned by nichdel, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge to give a trust token and 5 shinies (as soon as
> possible) to any other player who also performs the above three
> pledges, except Cuddle Beam.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by nichdel, whose terms are
>
> {
> I pledge to not refer to 天火狐 as Josh or Josh T.
> }
>
> Create a pledge owned by Publius Scribonius Scholasticus, whose terms
> are
>
> {
> I too pledge to not refer to 天火狐 as Josh or Josh T.
> }
> }}}
>
> I pay Agora 6 sh. to pend “Make Your Home Shine.”
>
> -o
>
> (The mechanical defect was that I’m pretty sure I nearly allowed any person
> to create pledges owned by any person.)
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