> Two of the lists are backups in case the first three go down (yeah, we
take things very seriously)

"we take things very seriously" might be a bit intimidating for new
players. I also think it;s worth mentioning the irc channel.

- Ien


On Tue, Aug 6, 2013 at 7:06 PM, Michael Slone <har...@harvel.org> wrote:

> On 2013-08-06, Charles Walker wrote:
> > I'd really appreciate some feedback on the following, in particular
> > whether the ###-delimited section should be removed or not, but also
> > generally.
>
> I think the ###-delimited section should be kept.
>
> Some minor nits:
>
> >
> >                         A distribution is where the Promotor starts
>                                          ^^^^^^^^
> I'd reword this.
>
>
> > You initiate an infraction case in the same way as a criminal case,
> > specifying the defendent, the violated rule and the alleged
>                  ^^^^^^^^^
> This should be "defendant".
>
> --
> Michael Slone
>

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