On 2013-08-06, Charles Walker wrote:
> I'd really appreciate some feedback on the following, in particular
> whether the ###-delimited section should be removed or not, but also
> generally.
I think the ###-delimited section should be kept.
Some minor nits:
>
> A distribution is where the Promotor starts
^^^^^^^^
I'd reword this.
> You initiate an infraction case in the same way as a criminal case,
> specifying the defendent, the violated rule and the alleged
^^^^^^^^^
This should be "defendant".
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Michael Slone
