Please check the following for errors/wording improvement/bugs?
Amend Rule 1728 (Dependent Actions) by replacing:
a) The rules explicitly authorize the performer to perform the
action by a set of one or more of the following methods (N
is 1 if not otherwise specified):
1) Without N Objections, where N is a positive integer.
2) With N Supporters, where N is a positive integer.
3) With N Agoran Consent, where N is an integer multiple
of 0.1 with a minimum of 1.
b) A person (the initiator) announced intent to perform the
action, unambiguously and clearly specifying the action and
method(s) (including the value of N for each method), at
most fourteen days earlier, and (if the action depends on
objections) at least four days earlier.
with:
a) The rules explicitly authorize the performer to perform the
action by a set of one or more of the following methods (N
is 1 and D is 4 if not otherwise specified):
1) Without N Objections, where N is a positive integer,
and D is always 4.
2) With N Supporters, where N is a positive integer, and
D is always 0.
3) With N Agoran Consent, where N is an integer multiple
of 0.1 with a minimum of 1, and D is always 4.
4) With D (Days) Advanced Notice, where D is a positive
integer.
b) A person (the initiator) announced intent to perform the
action, unambiguously and clearly specifying the action and
method(s) (including the value of N for each method),
between D and fourteen days earlier.
-Goethe
