On Mon, 2009-01-19 at 08:41 -0800, Ed Murphy wrote: > Here's my attempt: > > * SILENCE. When in effect, a number of Rests are created in the > possession of the Ninny. If the Ninny showed bad faith by > contesting an obviously-correct notice or by obstructing the > course of justice, the judge CAN and SHOULD with 2 support > declare the fine doubled when delivering sentence. The amount > of the fine is equal to the defined Class of the Crime or (if > the breach is not a defined crime) the power of the breached > Rule, doubled if the judge declared such as noted above, then > rounded down to the nearest integer. "SHOULD with 2 support" is potentially confusing. "CAN with 2 support [...] and SHOULD attempt to do so" is at least unambiguous, if a little wordy; I'm sure you could improve on that.
Other than that, looks good (does Ninny have a capital N nowadays?). -- ais523
