On Sat, Jun 14, 2008 at 11:41 AM, Ben Caplan
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>            We name it "Bard", and grant it those with wit.

You have the direct and indirect objects reversed.

> The ninth line of a Shakespearean sonnet begins with a trochee.

It does?  I just checked several, and all began with an iamb on the
ninth line.  As does your proposed ninth line:

> Clarified CANNOT/MAY NOT in the couplet.

It should be MAY NOT, since "awful pun" is subjective.

-root

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