On Sat, Jun 14, 2008 at 11:41 AM, Ben Caplan <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > We name it "Bard", and grant it those with wit.
You have the direct and indirect objects reversed. > The ninth line of a Shakespearean sonnet begins with a trochee. It does? I just checked several, and all began with an iamb on the ninth line. As does your proposed ninth line: > Clarified CANNOT/MAY NOT in the couplet. It should be MAY NOT, since "awful pun" is subjective. -root