Dear Deb,
Thank you for the review and the comments.
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All of these should be easy comments to resolve. (I'd thank the secdir
reviewer, but apparently it was me, LOL)
Shepherd write up: This is more than 2 years old and looks to be both
incomplete and out of date. I'll note that he made a comment on the media type
registration process (which may/may not have been followed).
Authors> Yes, we wrote to the media-types mailing list. It seems they
are ok with the section.
Introduction: I'm not sure why the expansion of MSK was deleted (v9 and v11),
but I'd suggest replacing 'MSK' with 'Message Session Key (MSK)' here. This
will allow the use of MSK in other sections (3 times that I counted).
Authors> Sorry about that. We expanded MSK the first time it appears on
each section.
Section 3.5.2, title and first sentence: 'non-responding' vs 'non-responsive'
(I'm not sure if this is common terminology, or a typo)
Authors> Thank you, we fixed the typo.
Section 3.5.3, para 3, second to last sentence: 'However, the EAP peer' should
be 'However, if the EAP peer'?
Authors> Thank you, yes.
Thank you again for the review and comments.
Best regards.
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Dan García Carrillo
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