Deb Cooley has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-11: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- All of these should be easy comments to resolve. (I'd thank the secdir reviewer, but apparently it was me, LOL) Shepherd write up: This is more than 2 years old and looks to be both incomplete and out of date. I'll note that he made a comment on the media type registration process (which may/may not have been followed). Introduction: I'm not sure why the expansion of MSK was deleted (v9 and v11), but I'd suggest replacing 'MSK' with 'Message Session Key (MSK)' here. This will allow the use of MSK in other sections (3 times that I counted). Section 3.5.2, title and first sentence: 'non-responding' vs 'non-responsive' (I'm not sure if this is common terminology, or a typo) Section 3.5.3, para 3, second to last sentence: 'However, the EAP peer' should be 'However, if the EAP peer'? _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list -- ace@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to ace-le...@ietf.org
