Thanks Pascal, I'll check it once the new version is published and will come back to you! Best regards Dirk
On Tue, May 14, 2024, 5:37 PM Pascal Thubert <pascal.thub...@gmail.com> wrote: > Many thanks Dirk! > > I'll be applying all this in version 19 to be published very soon. > > all the best > > Pascal > > Le mar. 30 avr. 2024 à 00:09, Dirk Hugo <dirkvh...@gmail.com> a écrit : > >> sorry for not having suceeded in using github the correct way ;-( I have >> attached the diff file here for convenience ;-/ >> Regards >> Dirk >> >> On Mon, Apr 29, 2024 at 11:49 PM Dirk Von Hugo via Datatracker < >> nore...@ietf.org> wrote: >> >>> Reviewer: Dirk Von Hugo >>> Review result: Ready with Nits >>> >>> Dear authors, intarea community, >>> as assigned INT directorate reviewer for >>> draft-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration >>> my comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area >>> Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments >>> just >>> like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and >>> resolve >>> them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. >>> For more >>> details on the INT Directorate, see >>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. >>> >>> Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as >>> READY >>> WITH NITS. I am no RPL expert but find the draft clearly written and >>> AFAICT >>> technically complete. Nits detected mainly affect grammar (a RPL => an >>> RPL >>> etc.), missing explanation of acronyms, to re-order acronym list, other >>> typos >>> (in my gut feeling as non-native speaker), missing ',' etc. ... I will >>> post the >>> diff-tool created .htm document in Pascals github (in case I succeed). >>> Thanks >>> and best regards Dirk >>> >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Int-dir mailing list >>> int-...@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/int-dir >>> >> > > -- > Pascal >
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