Many thanks Dirk! I'll be applying all this in version 19 to be published very soon.
all the best Pascal Le mar. 30 avr. 2024 à 00:09, Dirk Hugo <dirkvh...@gmail.com> a écrit : > sorry for not having suceeded in using github the correct way ;-( I have > attached the diff file here for convenience ;-/ > Regards > Dirk > > On Mon, Apr 29, 2024 at 11:49 PM Dirk Von Hugo via Datatracker < > nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Dirk Von Hugo >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> Dear authors, intarea community, >> as assigned INT directorate reviewer for >> draft-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration >> my comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area >> Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments >> just >> like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and >> resolve >> them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For >> more >> details on the INT Directorate, see >> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. >> >> Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as >> READY >> WITH NITS. I am no RPL expert but find the draft clearly written and >> AFAICT >> technically complete. Nits detected mainly affect grammar (a RPL => an RPL >> etc.), missing explanation of acronyms, to re-order acronym list, other >> typos >> (in my gut feeling as non-native speaker), missing ',' etc. ... I will >> post the >> diff-tool created .htm document in Pascals github (in case I succeed). >> Thanks >> and best regards Dirk >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Int-dir mailing list >> int-...@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/int-dir >> > -- Pascal
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