Thanks.

//Zahed
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From: Yong-Geun Hong <yonggeun.h...@gmail.com>
Sent: Tuesday, March 14, 2023 12:29:10 PM
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Subject: Re: Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14: 
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Dear  Zaheduzzaman Sarker.

Thanks for your valuable comments and sorry for the late response.

To resolve your comments, I updated the draft.

Please, find inline responses.

And, I submitted the revision draft based on your comments.
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-15.html

It is appreciated to check again and let me know any missing points.

Best regards.

Yong-Geun.

2022년 12월 15일 (목) 오후 7:25, Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker 
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Thanks for working on this document. This was a good read for me.

#Comments

  - The comparison table in section 2.7 seems nice one, however, as there is no
  description given on how to interpret  the  Low or Moderate, frequent or
  infrequent. It kind of fails to provided the intended comparison. Like the
  scale is not YES and NO which cloud be easily interpreted, but No, Low,
  Moderate, High and perhaps Yes. If there is such scale already available in
  RFC or other documents would be nice to provide references.
[Hong] Based on RFC 8578, I update the expression : No -> No, Low, Moderate, 
High -> Yes


  - There are terms used like 4G, LTE in this document, I don't think those
  need to be that much of generation specific and could easily be replaces by
  "cellular" unless we see an need to mention a particular cellular access
  generation for some specific reasons.
[Hong] Replace 4G, LTE -> cellular

  -



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