Dear Alvaro Retana Thanks for your valuable comments and sorry for the late response.
To resolve your comments, I updated the draft. Please, find inline responses. And, I submitted the revision draft based on your comments. https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-15.html It is appreciated to check again and let me know any missing points. Best regards. Yong-Geun. 2022년 12월 15일 (목) 오전 12:48, Alvaro Retana via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org>님이 작성: > Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > (1) This datatracker page should indicate that this document replaces > draft-hong-6lo-use-cases. > [Hong] Asking IETF officers or WG chairs. > > (2) No references are included for BLE, DECT-ULE, NFC, and PLC. > [Hong] Add a reference of BLE, DECT-ULE, NFC > > (3) There are several references to specific IETF WGs. This is not a good > practice because the WGs may change, be re-chartered, or even cease to > exist. > [Hong] Remove references of specific IETF working groups > > (4) No references are listed as Normative. I find this hard to believe, > given > the characterization described here [1]. Please review the references and > move > the ones that "must be read to understand...the technology" to be > Normative. > > [1] > > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ [Hong] Move RFC 4861, 4862, 4919, 4944, 6568, 6606, 7228, 7400, 7428, 7668, 8105, 8163, 8200, 9159 into Normative
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