Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- (1) This datatracker page should indicate that this document replaces draft-hong-6lo-use-cases. (2) No references are included for BLE, DECT-ULE, NFC, and PLC. (3) There are several references to specific IETF WGs. This is not a good practice because the WGs may change, be re-chartered, or even cease to exist. (4) No references are listed as Normative. I find this hard to believe, given the characterization described here [1]. Please review the references and move the ones that "must be read to understand...the technology" to be Normative. [1] https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/ _______________________________________________ 6lo mailing list 6lo@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo
