Here's my edit of the last paragraph. The character count in Libreoffice writer was 519. I know that you said that you needed another 200 characters. The original final paragraph was 311. Best I can do. Thanks.
On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 8:34 AM, Pasi Lallinaho <p...@shimmerproject.org>wrote: > Any way works for me as long as you send me an email with the extended > article or pointing to it. > > Pasi > > > On 26/04/13 14:23, Richard Dennis wrote: > > How do you want the edits made? Using the "etherpad" that I accessed > before? Let me know. Thank you and I'll get started working on it today. > > > On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 5:23 AM, Pasi Lallinaho > <p...@shimmerproject.org>wrote: > >> Richard, >> >> Your content was fine! At this time, I don't mind where you edit the >> article further, as long as you send it to me and communicate clearly what >> you have changed. I will need the extended articles by Sunday the latest, >> but please do the edits as soon as possible. 200 characters isn't a lot – a >> few sentences! >> >> Shawn, >> >> Find the Xfce article attached. I understood it doesn't need any >> extendending. >> >> Cheers, >> Pasi >> >> >> On 26/04/13 02:18, Richard Dennis wrote: >> >> I'll work on the article I worked on before, as long as my content was >> acceptable. >> Will I need to be readded to the Etherpad? And if you do want me to >> contribute more content, when? What is the specific deadline. >> Thank you. >> >> >> On Thu, Apr 25, 2013 at 5:08 PM, Pasi Lallinaho >> <p...@shimmerproject.org>wrote: >> >>> That's a good question, I didn't get that from the magazine editor. >>> Will ask for it now, thanks for noticing! >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Pasi >>> >>> >>> On 25/04/13 22:18, Shawn Nguyen wrote: >>> >>> Hi Pasi, >>> Were you able to receive any feedback on the article about the Xfce >>> Desktop Environment (since it's not attached to this email)? >>> >>> Thanks, >>> Shawn >>> >>> >>> On Thu, Apr 25, 2013 at 8:13 AM, Pasi Lallinaho <p...@shimmerproject.org >>> > wrote: >>> >>>> Hello, >>>> >>>> we need to expand some of the articles for the magazine. Here's a list >>>> of the articles: >>>> >>>> * Managing themes and styles (by Richard Dennis and Simon Steinbeiß, >>>> need 200 characters more) >>>> * Experiences... (by Inoki Sakaeru, need 800 characters more) >>>> * Controlling Xubuntu (by Elizabeth Krumbach, need 800 characters more – >>>> I will take care of this) >>>> >>>> Please be in touch with me with your ideas on how you would like to >>>> extend the articles. If you don't have any ideas, I have some for each – >>>> just ask me. We will need to send the articles back before Monday, 29th. >>>> I would like to get the extended articles in my hands AS SOON AS >>>> POSSIBLE to be able to re-review them. >>>> >>>> I'll attach all the articles as PDF files we got back from the magazine >>>> editor. This is pretty much how they will look like in the final >>>> magazine. If you think there's something wrong with them, please be in >>>> touch with me. >>>> >>>> Cheers, >>>> Pasi >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Pasi Lallinaho (knome) » http://open.knome.fi/ >>>> Leader of Shimmer Project and Xubuntu » >>>> http://shimmerproject.org/ >>>> Graphic artist, webdesigner, Ubuntu member » http://xubuntu.org/ >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> xubuntu-devel mailing list >>>> xubuntu-devel@lists.ubuntu.com >>>> https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/xubuntu-devel >>>> >>>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Pasi Lallinaho (knome) » http://open.knome.fi/ >>> Leader of Shimmer Project and Xubuntu » http://shimmerproject.org/ >>> Graphic artist, webdesigner, Ubuntu member » http://xubuntu.org/ >>> >>> >>> -- >>> xubuntu-devel mailing list >>> xubuntu-devel@lists.ubuntu.com >>> https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/xubuntu-devel >>> >>> >> >> >> -- >> Rich Dennis >> rden...@shorelancs.com >> Shorelan Computer Services >> >> >> >> >> -- >> Pasi Lallinaho (knome) » http://open.knome.fi/ >> Leader of Shimmer Project and Xubuntu » http://shimmerproject.org/ >> Graphic artist, webdesigner, Ubuntu member » http://xubuntu.org/ >> >> >> -- >> xubuntu-devel mailing list >> xubuntu-devel@lists.ubuntu.com >> https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/xubuntu-devel >> >> > > > -- > Rich Dennis > rden...@shorelancs.com > Shorelan Computer Services > > > > > -- > Pasi Lallinaho (knome) » http://open.knome.fi/ > Leader of Shimmer Project and Xubuntu » http://shimmerproject.org/ > Graphic artist, webdesigner, Ubuntu member » http://xubuntu.org/ > > > -- > xubuntu-devel mailing list > xubuntu-devel@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/xubuntu-devel > >
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