On 1/15/20 12:22 PM, Lars Kurth wrote: > @George, @Ian: let me know whether this is better and addresses your > concerns
This looks good to me. One side note: > The way how a reviewer expresses feedback, has a big impact on how the author "The way how X happens" isn't grammatically correct; it's actually redundant. You can say, "The way a reviewer expresses feedback" (no "how"); or if that seems ambiguous for some reason, you can say, "The way *that* a reviewer expresses feedback", or "The way *in which* a reviewer expresses feedback...". Alternately, you could say "How a reviewer expresses feedback has a big impact..." -George _______________________________________________ Xen-devel mailing list Xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org https://lists.xenproject.org/mailman/listinfo/xen-devel
