>> to a compile time macro MAX_RDIST_COUNT which is 4. On some systems, > > s/a compile time macro/a define/ > s/On some/Some/ > >> especially latest server chips might have more than 4 redistributors. > > I would add a comma after 'chips'.
In English, rules for dual commas forming a subclause like this are that the sentence still makes grammatical sense if the subclause is omitted. Therefore "On some systems, especially latest server chips, might have more than 4 redistributors." is expected be equivalent to "On some systems might have more than 4 redistributors." The latter however doesn't make sense. May I recommend instead: "Some systems, especially latest server chips, may have more than 4 redistributors." ~Andrew _______________________________________________ Xen-devel mailing list Xen-devel@lists.xen.org http://lists.xen.org/xen-devel
