Most slides: Inconsistent capitalization. Some bullets have their first word capitalized, some don't, sometimes on the same page. 17: "how to inlude" => "how to include" 58: clumsy phrasing: "allows to embed code" +. "allows embedding code" 58: verb tense: "that are execute" => "that are executed" 59: "to insert in the HTML the output" => "to insert the output into the HTML" 64: "attributed" => "attributes" 97: "selfreference" => "self-reference" 120: "works too" => "works, too" 133: Sorry, but I cannot parse the second bullet point. 138: "increment it of +1" => "increment it by 1"
On Jun 24, 5:37 pm, rev <reneversch...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi, > > I found some typos in the web2py slides (version 1.64.4): > 48: # the official main manu => manu = menu > 55: redirect to login uness it finds => uness = unless > 64: that shuould not be escaped => shuould = should > 75: SQLField is a query => SQLField = SQLQuery > 77: Connect to local SQLite database => connects to all supported dbs > are listed > 78: boolean ### they are stores as => stores = stored > 79: in the latter case => in = In > 98: transactions much be committed => much = must > 108: onaccept is called after validaiton => validaiton = validation > 119: (let''s also make => let''s = let's > 143: jquery provides => jquery = jQuery > 143: for more info => URL is not marked as a link > 153: Users Group => URL is not marked as a link > > If you really want to nitpick, make bulletlist entries consistent: > - Most bulletlist entries are capitalized, but not all. > - Some bulletlist entries end in a period, most don't. > > Cheers. > rev --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "web2py Web Framework" group. To post to this group, send email to web2py@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to web2py+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/web2py?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
