> From: Cornelia Huck <[email protected]>
> Sent: Wednesday, April 19, 2023 9:33 AM
>
> On Tue, Apr 11 2023, Parav Pandit <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> > Queue is a verb and noun both. Replacing it with enqueue avoids
> > ambiguity around plural queues noun vs verb; similar to virtio fs
> > device description.
>
> Personally, I don't think this patch adds much, but I don't really mind it,
> either.
>
> >
> > Suggested-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
> > Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <[email protected]>
> > ---
> > device-types/blk/description.tex | 2 +-
> > device-types/gpio/description.tex | 4 ++--
> > device-types/i2c/description.tex | 2 +-
> > device-types/scsi/description.tex | 2 +-
> > device-types/vsock/description.tex | 2 +-
> > 5 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
> >
>
> (...)
>
> > diff --git a/device-types/vsock/description.tex
> > b/device-types/vsock/description.tex
> > index 105bb30..07909d6 100644
> > --- a/device-types/vsock/description.tex
> > +++ b/device-types/vsock/description.tex
> > @@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ \subsubsection{Buffer Space
> > Management}\label{sec:Device Types / Socket Device / \field{buf_alloc} and
> \field{fwd_cnt} fields.
> >
> > \subsubsection{Receive and Transmit}\label{sec:Device Types / Socket
> > Device / Device Operation / Receive and Transmit} -The driver queues
> > outgoing packets on the tx virtqueue and incoming packet
> > +The driver enqueues outgoing packets on the tx virtqueue and incoming
> > +packet
>
> "queues (...) on" reads natural to me, but I'd use "to" with "enqueues"...
Yes, I agree.
The driver enqueues outgoing packets to the tx virtqueue reads better to me.
> can any
> native speakers comment?
>
> > receive buffers on the rx virtqueue. Packets are of the following form:
> >
> > \begin{lstlisting}
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