> From: Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
> Sent: Thursday, February 9, 2023 7:31 AM
> 
> On Thu, Feb 09, 2023 at 01:29:57PM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote:
> > On Thu, Feb 09 2023, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <[email protected]> wrote:
> >
> > > On Thu, Feb 09, 2023 at 03:41:08AM +0200, Parav Pandit wrote:
> > >> @@ -389,8 +392,8 @@ \subsection{Device Operation}\label{sec:Device
> > >> Types / Network Device / Device O  };  \end{lstlisting}
> > >>
> > >> -The controlq is used to control device features such as
> > >> -filtering.
> > >> +The controlq is used to control many device features described
> > >> +further in
> > >
> > > many seems subjective.
> > >
> > > s/many/some of the/ ?
> >
> > s/many/various/ instead? That section should cover all of the device
> > features controled via the control vq.
> 
> I like that.
> 
Looks good. Will send v4.

> > >
> > >> +section \ref{sec:Device Types / Network Device / Device Operation /
> Control Virtqueue}.


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