Hi all,

I have re-read the document, and I think it's basically ready.

Please find below just a few nits that I could notice.

Best,
/Marco

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- Section 12
--- HPKE should actually be referred to as RFC 9180

- Section 17
--- s/is is/is

- Section 17.1.3
--- s/utlize/utilize

- Section 17.1.4
--- s/in accordance to/in accordance with

- Section 17.1.7
--- s/the a post-handshake/a post-handshake

- Section 17.4.1
--- s/recommendations what/recommendations about what
--- s/identifer/identifier
--- s/recomments/recommends

- Section 18
--- s/has lead/has led

- Section 19
--- s/this document RECOMMENDS that/it is RECOMMENDED that

    (RECOMMENDS is not a term from BCP 14)

- Section 20
--- s/[RFC6979] ECDSA/ECDSA [RFC6979]

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Marco Tiloca
Ph.D., Senior Researcher

Phone: +46 (0)70 60 46 501

RISE Research Institutes of Sweden AB
Box 1263
164 29 Kista (Sweden)

Division: Digital Systems
Department: Computer Science
Unit: Cybersecurity

https://www.ri.se

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