Hello,

By his own suggestion, I am forwarding an email from Marco Tiloca (
marco.til...@ri.se) which apparently is getting his mails rejected by the
mailing list, he did a review of this document.

Thank you Marco! (I hope eventually he will be in communication with us
again)

Regards,

Renzo

---------- Forwarded message ---------
From: Marco Tiloca <marco.til...@ri.se>
Date: Mon, Apr 14, 2025 at 2:31 PM
Subject: Fwd: [Lake] Re: [Uta] WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13
To: Renzo Navas <renzoe...@gmail.com>

(...)
I have checked the draft and sent a mail to UTA earlier today, but I'm
experiencing issues with IETF mailing lists: it seems that my outgoing
mails are neither distributed nor archived.

Please see below the text of my mail to UTA. Feel free to relay it to the
UTA Chairs and/or to the UTA mailing list on my behalf. Hopefully, the
original message will also appear on the mailing list at some point.
(...)


=== MAIL ORIGINALLY SENT TO UTA ===

Hi all,

I have re-read the document, and I think it's basically ready.

Please find below just a few nits that I could notice.

Best,
/Marco

===================

- Section 12
--- HPKE should actually be referred to as RFC 9180

- Section 17
--- s/is is/is

- Section 17.1.3
--- s/utlize/utilize

- Section 17.1.4
--- s/in accordance to/in accordance with

- Section 17.1.7
--- s/the a post-handshake/a post-handshake

- Section 17.4.1
--- s/recommendations what/recommendations about what
--- s/identifer/identifier
--- s/recomments/recommends

- Section 18
--- s/has lead/has led

- Section 19
--- s/this document RECOMMENDS that/it is RECOMMENDED that

    (RECOMMENDS is not a term from BCP 14)

- Section 20
--- s/[RFC6979] ECDSA/ECDSA [RFC6979]

=================================


-------- Forwarded Message --------
Subject: [Lake] Re: [Uta] WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13
Date: Thu, 10 Apr 2025 10:17:39 +0200
From: Renzo Navas <renzoe...@gmail.com> <renzoe...@gmail.com>
To: uta@ietf.org, lake <l...@ietf.org> <l...@ietf.org>, ace <a...@ietf.org>
<a...@ietf.org>
CC: uta-cha...@ietf.org, Valery Smyslov <val...@smyslov.net>
<val...@smyslov.net>

Dear UTA, ACE, and LAKE (chair hat off) WGs,

I am the Shepherd of the document draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13 [1]
(TLS/DTLS 1.3 Profiles for the Internet of Things).

Currently in UTA WG Last call ending 14 April 2025 (not much time...).

I urge principally the UTA people, but also ACE or LAKE people who can
take a look (I think this profile is quite adjacent to those WGs
competences),
to please send your comments (to UTA ML) even if just to say there are
no problems with the document.
So far there are no comments sent to the UTA ML, even if in the past
there were some discussion and consensus, now will be a good time to
send a final OK (... or not).

Have good end of the work week,

Saludos,

Renzo


[1]
https://eur05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13&data=05%7C02%7Cmarco.tiloca%40ri.se%7C3bd7ed5b4b4d4892552008dd780847ec%7C5a9809cf0bcb413a838a09ecc40cc9e8%7C0%7C0%7C638798699174618719%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=cH8j%2FHLfs7oVZ7QWXQTNQ5oPjsZE0JFzA9k7GPiMAmM%3D&reserved=0



On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 10:53 AM Valery Smyslov <val...@smyslov.net>
<val...@smyslov.net> wrote:

Hi,

this message starts a two-week Working Group Last Call for
draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13
(TLS/DTLS 1.3 Profiles for the Internet of Things). The call will end 14
April 2025.
Please send your comments to the list before this date. Please do this even
when
you do not have problems with this document.

Regards,
Alan & Valery.

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