On Thu, Mar 02, 2023 at 11:06:24AM -0700, Peter Saint-Andre wrote:

> The authors hope that this version is now ready to move forward.

Just a quick comment:

   As specified in Section 6.3, restricting the presented identifiers in
   wildcard character (e.g., \*.example.com but not \*.\*.example.com)
   certificates to only one wildcard character (e.g., \*.example.com but
   and restricting the use of wildcards to only the left-most domain not
   \*.\*.example.com) and restricting the use of wildcards to only label
   can help to mitigate certain aspects of the attack described in the
   left-most domain label can help to mitigate certain aspects of
   [Defeating-SSL].  the attack described in [Defeating-SSL].

Why all the '\\' characters before the '*'s?  Suggested, double-quote the
names instead, if the concern is whether the "*" is literal or a
wildcard placeholder in the text for a generic example:

   As specified in Section 6.3, restricting the presented identifiers in
   wildcard character (e.g., "*.example.com" but not "*.*.example.com")
   certificates to only one wildcard character (e.g., "*.example.com" but
   and restricting the use of wildcards to only the left-most domain not
   "*.*.example.com") and restricting the use of wildcards to only label
   can help to mitigate certain aspects of the attack described in the
   left-most domain label can help to mitigate certain aspects of
   [Defeating-SSL].  the attack described in [Defeating-SSL].

Otherwise, looks fine.

-- 
    Viktor.

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