Hi Rich,

I reviewed these changes, and agree, they look good. Thanks for doing them.
I left a few comments/suggestions on the GitHub PR for possible clarity,
but these are not blocking and entirely optional.

On Wed, Oct 20, 2021 at 11:21 AM Salz, Rich <rsalz=
40akamai....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> I have a number of editorial changes I want to make to the draft.
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> Most of them are about avoiding redundant terms like “client” instead of
> “interactive or automated client” and CA, etc., instead of “certification
> authority”, etc.  The diffs are big (83 lines added and 95 lines removed,
> for a diff of 440 lines) so I won’t post it here. You can find it at
> https://github.com/richsalz/draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis/pull/34  If anyone
> has issues or problems with GitHub, let me know and I’ll email it to you.
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