On Wed, Apr 29, 2009 at 11:02 PM, Joe Smith <yasumo...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hey guys, > > I've got a rough draft for our OSCON application, and wanted to run it by > you all. Here's the request: > > > >> Please email me a 50-word company description and a hi-res logo. We prefer >> vector-based art (such as an Adobe Illustrator file), and if that is not >> possible we need a CMYK, 300 dpi file of the logo at least 3" wide. I also >> need the url you would like your logo to be linked to. >> > > Here's my description: > > Ubuntu promises to provide an up-to-date, stable experience for the > average user, with a strong focus on usability and ease of installation. The > Ubuntu California Team will demonstrate the various flavors of Ubuntu and > will be on hand to answer questions attendees may have about the Ubuntu > Linux distribution. > Putting on my editor's hat for a moment, I'd have to say this is good, Joe. To tighten it up a little I'd make the following changes: Ubuntu provides an up-to-date, stable experience for the average user, with a strong focus on usability and ease of installation. The Ubuntu California Team will demonstrate the various flavors of Ubuntu and will answer questions about the Ubuntu Linux distribution. [Taking out what I think are extraneous words and phrases only. Otherwise the original was fine.] Larry Cafiero
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