On 18/06/07, Louisa Parry <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi Chris (and since it's my first post to the list, a general hello to > all too) > > I like your pretty version but have a few very minor (proofreading-y) > niggles.
Thanks :-) Hi Louisa, I'll go through it when I get home and make some amendments. There are a few suggestions in this thread that I need to put in, I'll add your proofreading fixes too :-) > Also I couldn't help but notice that the word 'linux' isn't used at all > in the leaflet. Is this intentional because it's a bit too scary/geeky > sounding? Personally I would think it would be more important to > mention that in the 'why is it free?' section than the stuff about > Canonical... > > -Louisa :) Yeah, I did kinda leave it out intentionally. A few people have misconceptions about what Linux is and isn't, especially because of the FUD that MS is dishing out at the moment. I think sometimes it's perhaps better to get them hooked first then tell them it's Linux when they like it already :-) Chris -- ubuntu-uk@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-uk https://wiki.kubuntu.org/UKTeam/