On Sun, Dec 16, 2007 at 09:13:12PM +0000, Ronnie Tucker wrote: > Any objections to anything please let me know by Thursday at the latest. > > All comments welcome. >
Page 5 mentions Hardy Alpha 1 release and calls it a "tribe". I understood the collective names for animals was dropped and these are just called "alphas" now. Page 13-15 says that the article was authored by "linuxloop.com". Surely it was authored by a person "of linuxloop.com"? I appreciate that people like to go by their nickname or whatever, but using a domain name - just looks like a blatent advert and somewhat impersonal to me. Especially given all the other articles are penned by people with their real name or nick. Page 39 in the "Have your say" section the word "Agenda" is unnecessarily capitalised. Cheers, Al. -- ubuntu-marketing mailing list [email protected] Modify settings or unsubscribe at: https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-marketing
