Just completed, committed and pushed Chapter 2 edits to lp. Edits are all
in rev 56. A couple of observations/questions:
--screenshots in this chapter still show a username of "Ubuntu". Not sure
where we landed on what name was to be used. Not sure if current
screenshots are correct in this regard. But I DO know we have a screenshot
team. Yeah! :)
--Ubuntu 12.10 includes amazon.com search results. Do we want a screenshot
showing this?
--Can someone please tell me what the little birdy lens is for? Hovering
over it gives me no tool-tip. I've googled it trying to find what this
does, but I've found nothing, and the search bar in Dash gives me no clues.
I assume it's for social networking? Maybe twitter? I've written "social
networking" into the manual for now. If someone can let me know the
official name, I'll make this edit.
-- Hannie, I didn't pay too much attention to the HUD section as there
appears to be a comment at the top from you about needing to incorporate
updated HUD information from any author who was sending you this
information? Are we now good to edit this section? Or shall I wait until
this weekend?
As a sidenote, I still don't have a good feeling in my tummy with the
phraseology we are using to identify the Dash. Sometimes, we are using the
article "the" in front of Dash...other times, not. I can argue both sides
of this equation and arrive at no conclusion, however, I think we should be
consistent...either consistently one way, or consistently the other.
So I believe this concludes my assigned edits for this edition. Please let
me know if there are any other sections needing another set of eyes. I'll
be happy to read through them if requested.
--Jim
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