I agree with Jim, because the guide is going to be around for a while, we should probably work on trying to make it is clear and as useful if possible.
I vote for version 2. On Jul 15, 2012 2:38 PM, "Jim Connett" <jimandma...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hey all.....looks like the section in question is one that I edited and I > missed this, and I apologize. Because someone else had authored the > section, I was more focused on grammar/linguistics and less focused on > functional accuracy with this being my first involvement in this process. > I see now that I'll have to focus on both parts, equally, in future > editions. > > To have spelling or grammar errors in this manual is one thing....to have > contextual issues is quite another. While it may be a little more work, I > would be in favor of working on a 'version 2' release of the manual after > another round of edits. This is, after all, an LTS manual. Seems like we > also have disagreements with other terminology used in the current version > of the manual, so another revision, would serve multiple purposes. > > We also have to coordinate with translators as well...if we pursue a 2nd > rev. Even so, if this wasn't an LTS verion I wouldn't be as concerned, but > since it is, I think it's worthy of some consideration. > > I'll do whatever I can do to help remedy this situation. > > Jim > On Jul 15, 2012 8:43 AM, "Kevin Godby" <god...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> On Sun, Jul 15, 2012 at 3:10 AM, Hannie Dumoleyn >> <lafeber-dumole...@zonnet.nl> wrote: >> > In the precise version I found: >> >> To access \menu{Places}, move your mouse over the top bar and select >> >> \menu{Places}. >> >> It's kind of a silly sentence to begin with. "To access File, move >> your mouse over the top bar and select File." By the time the reader >> gets to this place in the manual, one would hope that he/she knows how >> to access pull-down menus. >> >> > I do not have a menu item Places in my Precise version. I guess it >> should be >> > \menu{Go}. >> >> It's even worse than that. There's an entire subsection dedicated to >> this non-existent Places menu. >> >> ubuntu-desktop/ubuntu-desktop.tex >> 179:\subsection{Places} >> 181:To access \menu{Places}, move your mouse over the top bar and >> select \menu{Places}. \marginnote{If you do not see the desktop menu, >> click somewhere on the desktop and it will appear.} >> 182:The \menu{Places} menu holds a list of commonly used folders (such >> as \menu{Documents}, \menu{Music}, \menu{Downloads}, and the >> \menu{Home Folder}). You can also browse the files on your computer by >> clicking \dropdown{Computer} in this menu. If you set up a home >> network, you will find a menu item to access shared files or folders. >> You can also access the \dropdown{Search for Files} tool from the >> \menu{Places} menu, or browse a list of recently opened folders. >> 205: \item[left page] The left pane of the file browser has shortcuts >> to commonly used folders. When a folder is bookmarked, it appears in >> the left pane. No matter what folder is open, the left pane will >> always contain the same folders. This left pane can be changed to >> display different features (such as Information, Tree, History, etc.) >> by clicking the down arrow beside ``Places'' near the top. >> >> > I think we should change this in an update because it is confusing for >> new >> > users if they get the wrong information, especially in an LTS version. >> > >> > Besides, the word top bar could be replaced by menu bar. >> >> I'd prefer not to release a new edition of the manual each time we >> find a bug. Releasing a new manual takes some time and work and I >> think we may be better off spending that effort on starting 12.10. >> I'd suggest that as we find these bugs in the 12.04 version of the >> manual we immediately fix them in the quantal repository. That way the >> 12.10 version of the manual is starting off better. >> >> What do others think? >> >> --Kevin >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual >> Post to : ubuntu-manual@lists.launchpad.net >> Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual >> More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp >> > > _______________________________________________ > Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual > Post to : ubuntu-manual@lists.launchpad.net > Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual > More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp > >
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