ya.. i think the existing sentence is good and need not be changed.. as the change is not in clear english..
Regards Vignesh.... I'm a free man... I use free software.... ----- Original Message ---- From: CloudFX <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Sunday, April 20, 2008 10:43:06 PM Subject: Re: [Bug 219806] Re: Tech Review Report for whyswitch.xml True, and that may or may not go through. We'll leave it to others to decide. Thanks, Nick On Sun, Apr 20, 2008 at 1:46 AM, Mads Peter Rommedahl <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I haven't read the whole patch through, but I strongly disagree with the > first proposed change (changing "This chapter discusses the benefits of > using Ubuntu and why you might like to switch to using it on your > computer." to "This chapter discusses the benefits of using Ubuntu and > why you might like to switch it on your computer.") as that really > doesn't make any sense, or sounds like a little clumsy English... > > A doc guru should review this. > > -- > Tech Review Report for whyswitch.xml > https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/219806 > You received this bug notification because you are a direct subscriber > of the bug. > > Status in Source Package "ubuntu-docs" in Ubuntu: New > > Bug description: > All errors found are grammatical and speak for themselves, so no need for > explanations. > ** Attachment added: "unnamed" http://launchpadlibrarian.net/13588650/unnamed -- Tech Review Report for whyswitch.xml https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/219806 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Documentation Project Team, which is subscribed to ubuntu-docs in ubuntu. Status in Source Package "ubuntu-docs" in Ubuntu: New Bug description: All errors found are grammatical and speak for themselves, so no need for explanations. ____________________________________________________________________________________ Be a better friend, newshound, and know-it-all with Yahoo! Mobile. Try it now. http://mobile.yahoo.com/;_ylt=Ahu06i62sR8HDtDypao8Wcj9tAcJ ** Attachment added: "unnamed" http://launchpadlibrarian.net/13589051/unnamed -- Tech Review Report for whyswitch.xml https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/219806 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
