ya.. i think the existing sentence is good and need not be changed.. as the 
change is not in clear english..

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Vignesh....
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From: CloudFX <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Sent: Sunday, April 20, 2008 10:43:06 PM
Subject: Re: [Bug 219806] Re: Tech Review Report for whyswitch.xml

True, and that may or may not go through.  We'll leave it to others to
decide.

Thanks,

Nick

On Sun, Apr 20, 2008 at 1:46 AM, Mads Peter Rommedahl <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
wrote:

> I haven't read the whole patch through, but I strongly disagree with the
> first proposed change (changing "This chapter discusses the benefits of
> using Ubuntu and why you might like to switch to using it on your
> computer." to "This chapter discusses the benefits of using Ubuntu and
> why you might like to switch it on your computer.") as that really
> doesn't make any sense, or sounds like a little clumsy English...
>
> A doc guru should review this.
>
> --
> Tech Review Report for whyswitch.xml
> https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/219806
> You received this bug notification because you are a direct subscriber
> of the bug.
>
> Status in Source Package "ubuntu-docs" in Ubuntu: New
>
> Bug description:
> All errors found are grammatical and speak for themselves, so no need for
> explanations.
>


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