Comment from debian package maintainer (copied here so I don't forget about it when reviewing):
--------------------------------------------------------------------- On Mon, 10 Jan 2011, Chris Wilson wrote: > patch submitted Thanks for your patches. First of I'd like to point out that the description put in debian/control is based on the upstream description of the project. So you probably want to submit this to upstream as well so that they update their "readme.txt" and their website. https://bugs.launchpad.net/zim/+filebug Then your updated description is not correct: > + Uses of Zim include: > + • TODO lists > + • Taking notes during meetings > + • Drafting blog entries and emails > + • Brainstorming This is not a valid list in a description field. You need to have "2 spaces" at the start otherwise the lines will be wrapped together. And you should probably avoid UTF-8 characters. So it should be: Uses of Zim include: * TODO lists * Taking notes during meetings * Drafting blog entries and emails * Brainstorming A few more remarks: > + Zim is a graphical text editor which allows the user to maintain a collection "which allows" is generally bad-style -> "text editor used to maintain" > + of wiki-style interconnected pages. The text of each page can contain links Why "the text" ? Each page can contain links. > + to other pages as well as simple formatting. Creating a new page is as easy > + as linking to a nonexistent page. Pages are stored in a folder structure, > like > + in an outliner, and can have attachments. > . > - This tool can be used to keep track of TODO lists or ideas, > - to take notes during a meeting or to draft any other kind of > - text (blog entries, important mails, etc.). > + Various plugins provide additional functionality, like a task list manager, > + an equation editor, a tray icon, and version control. > + . As a whole, it looks like an improvement though. Thanks for the work. [ scratch 250 Kb of debdiff irrelevant for the description that I don't understand ] Cheers, -- Raphaël Hertzog ◈ Debian Developer ** Changed in: zim Importance: Undecided => Wishlist -- You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/613303 Title: Zim Desktop Wiki description is confusing -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list ubuntu-bugs@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
