Update from Colin:
On Tue, Aug 01, 2006 at 04:03:17PM -0400, Jonathan Jesse wrote: > I apologize for the delay on this but on the wiki page > (https://wiki.kubuntu.org/KubuntuDapperKnownProblems) you mention the fact > that the Kubuntu notes pretty much suck. So I have changed htem and they are > currently sitting on http://doc.ubuntu.com/kubuntu/release-notes/C/index.html > I was wondering if you could review them and see if they solve the request > for > change. This is much better than it was. I suggest the following further changes: -Kubuntu is released regularly and predictably in order to provide you -with the best Linux experience possible. The focus of Dapper Drake is -long term, hence the LTS in the release name, of 3 years. The primary -goal of this release was having a stable and polished release. +Kubuntu is released regularly and predictably in order to provide you +with the best Linux experience possible. The focus of Dapper Drake is +long term support, hence the LTS in the release name, for 3 years on +the desktop. Its primary goal is stability and polish. -Sine our October 2005 release (version 5.10) a lot of changes have been -made and here is the list... +Since our October 2005 release (version 5.10), a lot of changes have +been made: Comma before "saving both time and bandwidth". "New Installer On the Alternate Install CD, there is a new installer which will help with customizing your install of Kubuntu. From the menu, one can either install a server version of Kubuntu or the normal desktop version, along with the ability to repair a corrupted system." This installer is not new. Heading it with "New Installer" is totally wrong - the new installer is ubiquity, not anything on the alternate install CD. I suggest heading the previous item with "New Installer (Ubiquity)" rather than just Ubiquity, and making this item be something like: Alternate Installation Scenarios The Alternate Install CD uses the installation system familiar to users of Kubuntu 5.10 and earlier; it can be used in situations requiring more control of the installation process. From the menu, one can either install a server version of Kubuntu or the normal desktop version, along with the ability to repair a corrupted system. "shipit.kubntu.org" -> "shipit.kubuntu.org" "In the last version (Breezy), a release candidate was installed by default, now get the final product." Comma-splices (or run-on sentences) should not be used in formal English. This would be better: "In the last version (Breezy), a release candidate of OpenOffice.org was installed by default; Kubuntu 6.06 LTS has the final product" would be better. As above, "Open Office" should be replaced by the proper upstream name, "OpenOffice.org". -Like previous releases, there are two flavors of CD, one is Desktop CD -and the other is an Alternate Install CD. +Two CD image flavors are available for download: the Desktop CD and the +Alternate Install CD. -Adept will help you with upgrading, don't worry it's quite painless. +Adept will help you with upgrading; don't worry, it's quite painless. -That's it, the next step is to apply the changes and select close. +That's it. The next step is to apply the changes and select close. "After the upgrade is finished, logout to restart your session with the new version of KDE and everyone else is now upgraded. No reboot necessary." Should "everyone" be "everything" here? A reboot most certainly *is* necessary after upgrading from breezy to dapper, due to the new kernel/udev infrastructure. -If you find a problem with Kubuntu 6.06 LTS please check -http://wiki.kubuntu.com/DapperKnownProblems before reporting bugs. +If you find a problem with Kubuntu 6.06 LTS, please check +http://wiki.kubuntu.com/DapperKnownProblems before reporting bugs. Thanks, -- Problems with Dapper Release Notes for Kubuntu https://launchpad.net/bugs/48525 -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list ubuntu-bugs@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
