Hi to all, Indeed this is a very nice folder ! but not suited for individual printers.
A few personal comments to improve the content : - Nice background : above the word "AND" appears as a link between "FREE ..." and "UNLEASH ...". It should be translated as the titles "FREE YOUR MIND" and "UNLEASH YOUR PC" in Dutch. - First paragraph, as introduction, should be more visible (different police, character, italic or bold) compared with the following text. - Text "Bovenal: ubuntu is vrij!" should be followed by "Vrij te kopieren, gebruiken, verdelen en verbeteren!" and more visible. - Last paragraph : the sentence "Meer weten ..." lseems to me ending with "... zal maken" followed by a dot. - "Surf" sounds me better than "Surft" - The sentence "kortom: free your mind!" (to be translated) is related to the whole message, and not with "Meer weten: ... zal maken." : should be separated from the previous sentence. Regards Jean Steven Van Landeghem a écrit : > mea cupla! verkeerde link, dit is de juiste: > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/BelgianTeam/ComputerFairs?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=ubuntu.flyer.jpg > <https://wiki.ubuntu.com/BelgianTeam/ComputerFairs?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=ubuntu.flyer.jpg> > > -------- Forwarded Message -------- > *From*: Steven Van Landeghem <[email protected] > <mailto:steven%20van%20landeghem%20%[email protected]%3e>> > *To*: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > *Subject*: nieuwe flyer voor beurzen > *Date*: Sat, 16 May 2009 12:42:02 +0200 > > Beste mensheid, > > Ik ben nieuw op launchpad en de mailing list en heb meteen een nieuwe > flyer ontworpen om eventueel te gebruiken op beurzen e.d. Je vindt hem > in de wiki. Feedback is welkom! > > Groetjes, > -- ubuntu-be mailing list / mailto:[email protected] Modify settings or unsubscribe at: https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-be
