On Tue, 2008-12-02 at 15:13 -0300, spg76 wrote:

> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions

Hi!

I much prefer the second version. Black handles are better and look
classic. The L shape helps to avoid the problematic negative spaces you
have with the triangle. Those make the first design harder to read in
smaller sizes. Or maybe it's just the strong diagonal falling line that
bothers me.

The upper blade seems to be darker.

I would expect a tiny shadow cast by the upper blade on the lower blade
(only large version).

The marks on smaller sizes need to be emphasised (48 and 32, 22 and 16
are maybe better off without).


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