On Thu, 25 Sep 2025, David Benjamin wrote:
Ah thanks! I agree. Took a stab at merging them on GitHub: https://tlswg.org/tls13-pkcs1/draft-ietf-tls-tls13-pkcs1.html https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-tls-tls13-pkcs1&url_2=https://tlswg.github.io/tls13-pkcs1/draft-ietf-tls-tls13-pkcs1.txt Look reasonable? I can cut another draft with the changes.
Thanks for the quick response. Yes that looks good, please submit a new draft with this and I'll move the document forward. Paul
On Thu, Sep 25, 2025 at 3:14 PM Paul Wouters <paul.wouters=40aiven...@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: Hi, In general the document looks fine but I do find the Introduction and Security Considerations to have a lot of overlap in what they talk about. I think that could be consolidated by moving and merging all but the last paragraph of the Security Considerations to Section 1, and leave the Security Considerations to talk about security considerations _when implementing this draft_ (I personally prefer the more detailed text in the Security Considerations over the Section 1 text describing the same issues but I'm fine with whatever works) Paul _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list -- tls@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to tls-le...@ietf.org
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