On Thu, 25 Sep 2025, David Benjamin wrote:

Ah thanks! I agree. Took a stab at merging them on GitHub:
https://tlswg.org/tls13-pkcs1/draft-ietf-tls-tls13-pkcs1.html
https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-tls-tls13-pkcs1&url_2=https://tlswg.github.io/tls13-pkcs1/draft-ietf-tls-tls13-pkcs1.txt
Look reasonable? I can cut another draft with the changes.

Thanks for the quick response. Yes that looks good, please submit a new
draft with this and I'll move the document forward.

Paul

On Thu, Sep 25, 2025 at 3:14 PM Paul Wouters 
<paul.wouters=40aiven...@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
      Hi,

In general the document looks fine but I do find the Introduction and Security 
Considerations to have a lot of overlap in what they talk about.

I think that could be consolidated by moving and merging all but the last 
paragraph of the Security Considerations to Section 1, and leave the Security
Considerations to talk about security considerations _when implementing this 
draft_ (I personally prefer the more detailed text in the Security 
Considerations
over the Section 1 text describing the same issues but I'm fine with whatever 
works)

Paul
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