Yes, I was suggesting a link to each registry in addition to its name. Not 
critical, but a convenience for readers.
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draft-ietf-tls-rfc8447bis-13: No Objection

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Thanks for your work on this. I think this will make the distinction between
"types" of N clearer in the TLS registries. Two minor suggestions:

First, pointers to the IANA registries in each section would be appreciated.

I did that via the headings ;) or, do you mean like a hyperlink / reference?

Second, the abstract asserts that "This document updates the following RFCs:
3749, 5077, 4680, 5246, 5705, 5878, 6520, 7301, and 8447." However, the header
states only that it updates RFC8447. I suspect the logic is that this document
is updating the updates made by 8447, so that the "updated" 8447 makes
different changes to the older documents. That seems needlessly complex; the
header should reflect the documents to which this will make changes in practice.

drat: I changed the header but forgot to update the abstract. Fixed via:
https://github.com/tlswg/rfc8447bis/pull/87

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