Reviewer: Giuseppe Fioccola Review result: Has Nits This document updates the changes in RFC 8447 and requests IANA to make changes to a number of TLS and DTLS registries. In particular, it updates the "Recommended" column in TLS registries by defining a third value "D" for items that are discouraged and adds a "Comment" column to the registries that do not already have it. This document updates several RFCs: RFC 3749, RFC 5077, RFC 4680, RFC 5246, RFC 5705, RFC 5878, RFC 6520, RFC 7301, and RFC 8447.
I think that the document has a well defined scope and is quite clear. However, I have few suggestions: - In the Abstract, I suggest to replace 'adds a Comments column to all active registries' with 'adds a Comment column to all the registries that do not already have it'. - In section 3, I suggest to replace 'The permitted values are' with 'The permitted values of the Recommended column are', just to avoid any confusion. - In the sections from 4 to 14, I suggest to add some explanation on why specific registries are changed to discouraged. Some insight would help the reader. - I would also add some observations on the operational and interoperability impacts, if any, of the changes proposed in the document. - Currently, the section on "IANA Considerations" simply says that the document is entirely about changes to TLS-related IANA registries, as per RFC 8447. Instead, I would put all the relevant sections on IANA requests (i.e. sections from 4 to 14) under an "IANA Considerations" section. In this way you can avoid the IANA section with no content. _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list -- tls@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to tls-le...@ietf.org
