On Mon, Oct 16, 2023 at 9:18 AM David Benjamin <david...@chromium.org> wrote:
> I've thus rephrased it in terms of just one group, which I think is much > tidier. How does this look to you? > > https://github.com/davidben/tls-key-share-prediction/commit/310fa7bbddd1fe0c81e3a6865a59880efc901b33 > I agree with the sentiment, but I still see one problem. This text seems really tough to write, so I sympathize. The only remaining problem I see is "Restricting to prediction-safe groups". Maybe "Restricting this selection to..."? I don't have a strong opinion, but I'm pretty sure "Restricting to" is not right. thanks, Rob
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