Sean,
Thank you for your reply. I am of course happy with them ;-)
Regards
-éric
-----Original Message-----
From: Sean Turner <s...@sn3rd.com>
Date: Friday, 29 January 2021 at 16:54
To: Eric Vyncke <evyn...@cisco.com>
Cc: The IESG <i...@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-tls-ticketreque...@ietf.org"
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Subject: Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07:
(with COMMENT)
> On Dec 14, 2020, at 02:52, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org>
wrote:
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> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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>
> Thank you for the work put into this document. It is short and easy to
> understand.
>
> I find that the contents of section 1 and of section 2 are quite
duplicate.
While true, I do sometimes find we end up here because there have been
requests to move information forward to the introduction in the draft.
Unfortunately, that results in some duplication. I would like to propose that
if the draft does not contradict itself that we leave it as is.
> In section 2, the use of capitalized word after a ":" looks weird to me
but I
> am not a native English speaker.
I suspect that his might be a style thing so I would like to leave this one
for the RFC editor.
> I hope that this helps to improve the document,
>
> Regards,
>
> -éric
>
>
>
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