Hiya,

On 19/01/2021 14:14, Barry Leiba via Datatracker wrote:
Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: Yes

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I think this is the first time I’ve reviewed a document where the “References”
section is longer than the rest of the document combined.

Yeah, it's a bit of an outlier;-)


Just a couple of nits:

— Section 1.1 —

    Fallback to these versions are prohibited
    through this update.

Fallback “is” prohibited (not “are”).

— Section 6 —

    This documents updates [RFC7525] Section 3.1.1

“document”, singular.

Ta. Also fixed in [1] with diff vs. -11 at [2]

S.

[1] https://github.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/blob/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt [2] https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt





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