Hiya,
On 19/01/2021 14:14, Barry Leiba via Datatracker wrote:
Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: Yes When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I think this is the first time I’ve reviewed a document where the “References” section is longer than the rest of the document combined.
Yeah, it's a bit of an outlier;-)
Just a couple of nits: — Section 1.1 — Fallback to these versions are prohibited through this update. Fallback “is” prohibited (not “are”). — Section 6 — This documents updates [RFC7525] Section 3.1.1 “document”, singular.
Ta. Also fixed in [1] with diff vs. -11 at [2] S.[1] https://github.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/blob/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt [2] https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt
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