Thank you Ilari, 

In response to your comments below: 

- I did not see requirements where to place the end-entity certificate 
anywhere. I think most TLS code outright assumes that the end-entity 
certificate is the first one. 

>>> We will add it.

- More generally, I did not see it specified how the certificate chain 
is laid out to the individual certficate fields (it is fairly 
obvious, but should still be specified). 
>>> We will specify it. 

- The examples could have multiple certificate types in ClientHello to 
more clearly show what is actually going on. 
>>> We will add examples with multiple certificate types in Client Hello 

- You should also specify use in TLS 1.2 in the same draft (or say that 
is prohibited). This is so one only needs one reference for the 
codepoint allocation. 

>>> It is not prohibited, for TLS 1.2 the extension is already specified: [ 
>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-serhrouchni-tls-certieee1609-01 ] 
[ https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-serhrouchni-tls-certieee1609-01 | 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-serhrouchni-tls-certieee1609-01 ] 
We will update the draft 

- I found the document quite hard to read due to various editorial 
issues. 
>> We will update the draft 


Kind Regards 
Mounira

----- Mail original -----
De: "Ilari Liusvaara" <ilariliusva...@welho.com>
À: "Mounira Msahli" <mounira.msa...@telecom-paristech.fr>
Cc: "tls" <tls@ietf.org>
Envoyé: Vendredi 24 Août 2018 17:50:38
Objet: Re: [TLS] TLS 1.3 Authentication using ETSI TS 103 097 and IEEE 1609.2 
certificates

On Fri, Aug 24, 2018 at 04:09:43PM +0200, Mounira Msahli wrote: 
> Hi all, 
> 
> 
> The draft: TLS 1.3 Authentication using IEEE 1609.2/ETSI TS 103097 
> certificates is updated in accordance with TLS 1.3: 
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-tls-certieee1609-01 
> 
> This document describes the use of certificates specified by the Institute of 
> Electrical and Electronics Engineers IEEE1609.2 and the European 
> Telecommunications Standards 
> 
> Institute ETSI TS 103097. These standards are defined in order to secure 
> communications in vehicular environments. 
> 
> This extension is very useful and has become a pressing need for 
> (Vehicle-To-Internet(V2Internet), Vehicle-To-Cloud(V2Cloud),...). 
> 
> We are soliciting feedback from the WG on the draft. 

Some quick comments: 

- I did not see requirements where to place the end-entity certificate 
anywhere. I think most TLS code outright assumes that the end-entity 
certificate is the first one. 
- More generally, I did not see it specified how the certificate chain 
is laid out to the individual certficate fields (it is fairly 
obvious, but should still be specified). 
- The examples could have multiple certificate types in ClientHello to 
more clearly show what is actually going on. 
- You should also specify use in TLS 1.2 in the same draft (or say that 
is prohibited). This is so one only needs one reference for the 
codepoint allocation. 
- I found the document quite hard to read due to various editorial 
issues. 


-Ilari 

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