Hi, In TLSv1.3, draft 24, there is a small typographical error. It needs to be corrected.
(1) Appendix D. Backward Compatibility Second Paragraph. Second sentence. There is a double "and". /* Original */ ========= Servers can also handle clients trying to use future versions of TLS as long as the ClientHello format remains compatible and and there is at least one protocol version supported by both the client and the server. ========== /* Corrected */ ====== Servers can also handle clients trying to use future versions of TLS as long as the ClientHello format remains compatible and there is at least one protocol version supported by both the client and the server. ====== (2) Section 4.2.8.2. ECDHE Parameters First paragraph, first sentence. There is a double "the". /* Original */ ========= ECDHE parameters for both clients and servers are encoded in the the opaque key_exchange field of a KeyShareEntry in a KeyShare structure. ========= /* Corrected */ ========= ECDHE parameters for both clients and servers are encoded in the opaque key_exchange field of a KeyShareEntry in a KeyShare structure. ========= (3) Appendix E.5. Replay Attacks on 0-RTT Second paragraph, second line. There is a double "the". /* Original */ =========== If data can be replayed a large number of times, additional attacks become possible, such as making repeated measurements of the the speed of cryptographic operations. =========== /* Corrected */ ========== If data can be replayed a large number of times, additional attacks become possible, such as making repeated measurements of the speed of cryptographic operations. ========== Please correct them. with regards, Saravanan _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list TLS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls
