Hi Joe, Looks OK, but don't you need to also drop 'as well as version 1.3 of TLS' from the first paragraph in the Introduction?
Regards, Dan On Thu, May 25, 2017 at 12:29 AM, Joseph Salowey <j...@salowey.net> wrote: > Hi Dan and Alissa, > > There has been some churn in the text of the document due to my oversight > when sending the document to the IESG. The proposed new text provided > below show should also resolve your comment. Please let me know if you see > any issues with this approach. > > Thanks, > > Joe > > Replacing section 4: > > > The cipher suites defined in this document MUST NOT be negotiated for > any version of (D)TLS other than TLS 1.2. Servers MUST NOT select > one of these cipher suites when selecting TLS version other than TLS > 1.2. A client MUST treat the selection of these cipher suites in > combination with a different version of TLS as an error and generate > a fatal 'illegal_parameter' TLS alert. > > Cipher suites TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256, TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384, > TLS_AES_128_CCM_8_SHA256 and TLS_AES_128_CCM_SHA256 are used to > support equivalent functionality in TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-tls13]. > > > > > On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 8:15 AM, Alissa Cooper <ali...@cooperw.in> wrote: > >> Dan, thank you for your reviews of this document and thanks to the >> authors for providing clarifications. I have balloted No Objection. >> >> Alissa >> >> > On May 19, 2017, at 6:43 PM, Dan Romascanu <droma...@gmail.com> wrote: >> > >> > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >> > Review result: Ready >> > >> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your >> > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. >> > >> > For more information, please see the FAQ at >> > >> > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> > >> > Document: draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-?? >> > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >> > Review Date: 2017-05-19 >> > IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-18 >> > IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-25 >> > >> > Summary: >> > >> > This is a straight-forward and clear document that defines several new >> > cipher suites for the Transport Layer Security (TLS) protocol version >> > 1.2 and higher, based on the Ephemeral Elliptic Curve Diffie-Hellman >> > with Pre-Shared Key (ECDHE_PSK) key exchange together with the >> > Authenticated Encryption with Associated Data (AEAD) algorithms >> > AES-GCM and AES-CCM. The document is well written and I appreciate the >> > effort to clarify in the Introduction the context, what was missing, >> > and why the document is necessary. One issue raised in my initial >> > review for draft-03 was addressed, discussed and draft-04 includes >> > useful clarification text. >> > >> > The document is Ready >> > >> > Major issues: >> > >> > Minor issues: >> > >> > Nits/editorial comments: >> > >> > >> > _______________________________________________ >> > Gen-art mailing list >> > gen-...@ietf.org >> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> >> >
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