On Thu, Nov 23, 2017 at 01:19:51PM -0600, Scott Cheloha wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> This makes parts of isakmpd(8) more immediately intelligible to
> a beginner.
> 
> --
> Scott Cheloha
> 
> Index: sbin/isakmpd/isakmpd.8
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/isakmpd/isakmpd.8,v
> retrieving revision 1.118
> diff -u -p -r1.118 isakmpd.8
> --- sbin/isakmpd/isakmpd.8    5 Mar 2016 08:38:36 -0000       1.118
> +++ sbin/isakmpd/isakmpd.8    23 Nov 2017 19:25:20 -0000
> @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
>  .Sh DESCRIPTION
>  The
>  .Nm
> -daemon establishes security associations for encrypted
> +daemon establishes security associations (SAs) for encrypted
>  and/or authenticated network traffic.
>  At this moment, and probably forever, this means
>  .Xr ipsec 4
> 

i think that's reasonable. i started to make the change, then found
ipsec.conf.5 needed adjusting, and then finally found the worm can: we
spell both "Security Association" and "security association" in the
manuals. there's too many for me to try and roll in, so i committed the
diff below as a best i can do now. not sure if it's worth changing
20-odd examples one way or the other...

thanks for your mail,
jmc

Index: ipsecctl/ipsec.conf.5
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/ipsecctl/ipsec.conf.5,v
retrieving revision 1.153
diff -u -r1.153 ipsec.conf.5
--- ipsecctl/ipsec.conf.5       27 Oct 2017 08:29:32 -0000      1.153
+++ ipsecctl/ipsec.conf.5       23 Nov 2017 20:47:08 -0000
@@ -44,9 +44,7 @@
 In its most basic form, a
 .Em flow
 is established between hosts and/or networks,
-and then Security Associations
-.Pq Em SA
-are established,
+and then Security Associations (SAs) are established,
 which detail how the desired protection will be achieved.
 IPsec uses flows
 to determine whether to apply security services to an IP packet or not.
Index: isakmpd/isakmpd.8
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/isakmpd/isakmpd.8,v
retrieving revision 1.118
diff -u -r1.118 isakmpd.8
--- isakmpd/isakmpd.8   5 Mar 2016 08:38:36 -0000       1.118
+++ isakmpd/isakmpd.8   23 Nov 2017 20:47:08 -0000
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
 The
 .Nm
-daemon establishes security associations for encrypted
+daemon establishes Security Associations (SAs) for encrypted
 and/or authenticated network traffic.
 At this moment, and probably forever, this means
 .Xr ipsec 4
@@ -212,8 +212,7 @@
 .It Fl f Ar fifo
 The
 .Fl f
-option specifies the
-.Tn FIFO
+option specifies the FIFO
 (a.k.a. named pipe) where the daemon listens for
 user requests.
 If the path given is a dash

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