Author: gjb
Date: Thu Aug 28 21:25:30 2014
New Revision: 270769
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/270769

Log:
  FDP style nits.
  
  Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml  Thu Aug 28 
21:18:59 2014        (r270768)
+++ stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml  Thu Aug 28 
21:25:30 2014        (r270769)
@@ -547,24 +547,27 @@
          two listening sockets bound to the same port has been
          fixed.</para>
 
-       <para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Kernel RPC code, which is a
-         base of NFS server took multiple optimizations, that significantly
-         improved its performance and <acronym>SMP</acronym> 
scapability.</para>
+       <para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Kernel RPC code, which
+         is a base of NFS server took multiple optimizations, that
+         significantly improved its performance and
+         <acronym>SMP</acronym> scapability.</para>
 
-       <para>New kernel-based iSCSI target and initiator code took many
-         fixes and performance optimizations.</para>
+       <para>New kernel-based iSCSI target and initiator code took
+         many fixes and performance optimizations.</para>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3 xml:id="disks">
        <title>Disks and Storage</title>
 
        <para revision="260385" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">The
-         &man.geom.4; subsystem has been updated to support I/O direct 
dispatch.
-         When safety requirements are met, it allows to avoid passing
-         I/O requests to GEOM 
<literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> thread, executing them 
directly
-         in the caller context. That allows to avoid CPU bottlenecks in
-         <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> threads, plus avoid 
several context switches per I/O.
-         </para>
+         &man.geom.4; subsystem has been updated to support I/O
+         direct dispatch.  When safety requirements are met, it
+         allows to avoid passing I/O requests to GEOM
+         <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> thread,
+         executing them directly in the caller context.  That allows
+         to avoid CPU bottlenecks in
+         <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> threads,
+         plus avoid several context switches per I/O.</para>
 
        <para revision="260385" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">The
          &man.geom.4; RAID driver has been
@@ -574,9 +577,8 @@
          &man.cam.4; subsystem has been updated to support
          finer-grained locking, direct dispatch and multi-queue.
          Combined with &man.geom.4; direct dispatch that allows to
-         reduce lock congestion and improve <acronym>SMP</acronym> scalability 
of the
-         SCSI/ATA stack.
-         </para>
+         reduce lock congestion and improve <acronym>SMP</acronym>
+         scalability of the SCSI/ATA stack.</para>
 
        <para revision="260478">The &man.geom.8;
          <literal>GEOM_MULTIPATH</literal> class has been updated to
@@ -585,13 +587,15 @@
        <para revision="260857">The &man.virtio_blk.4; driver has been
          updated to support unmapped I/O.</para>
 
-       <para revision="260858">The &man.virtio_scsi.4; driver has been
-         updated to support unmapped I/O.</para>
+       <para revision="260858">The &man.virtio_scsi.4; driver has
+         been updated to support unmapped I/O.</para>
 
        <para revision="264522">Support for LUN-based CD changers has
          been removed from the &man.cd.4; driver.</para>
 
-       <para revision="264732">Support for <literal>BIO_DELETE</literal> has 
been added to &man.zfs.8; <literal>zvol</literal> volumes.</para>
+       <para revision="264732">Support for
+         <literal>BIO_DELETE</literal> has been added to &man.zfs.8;
+         <literal>zvol</literal> volumes.</para>
 
        <para revision="264734">Support for 9th generation HP host bus
          adapter cards has been added to &man.ciss.4;.</para>
@@ -601,35 +605,35 @@
          providing support for LSI Fusion-MPT 3 12Gb SCSI/SATA
          controllers.</para>
 
-       <para revision="265678">A new <literal>zvol</literal> property 
<literal>volmode</literal>
-         and  &man.sysctl.8; <literal>vfs.zfs.vol.mode</literal> has been
-         added to allow switching <literal>zvol</literal> between three 
different ways of
-         exposing it to a user: <literal>geom</literal>,
+       <para revision="265678">A new <literal>zvol</literal> property
+         <literal>volmode</literal> and  &man.sysctl.8;
+         <literal>vfs.zfs.vol.mode</literal> has been added to allow
+         switching <literal>zvol</literal> between three different
+         ways of exposing it to a user: <literal>geom</literal>,
          <literal>dev</literal> and <literal>none</literal>.</para>
 
        <para revision="265922" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&lsi;">The
-         &man.mrsas.4; driver has been added,
-         providing support for LSI MegaRAID SAS controllers.  The
-         &man.mfi.4; driver will attach to the controller, by default.
-         To enable &man.mrsas.4; add
-         <literal>hw.mfi.mrsas_enable=1</literal> to
-         <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>, which turns off
+         &man.mrsas.4; driver has been added, providing support for
+         LSI MegaRAID SAS controllers.  The &man.mfi.4; driver will
+         attach to the controller, by default.  To enable
+         &man.mrsas.4; add <literal>hw.mfi.mrsas_enable=1</literal>
+         to <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>, which turns off
          &man.mfi.4; device probing.</para>
 
        <note>
-         <para>At this time, the &man.mfiutil.8; utility and
-           the &os; version of
-           <application>MegaCLI</application> and
+         <para>At this time, the &man.mfiutil.8; utility and the &os;
+           version of <application>MegaCLI</application> and
            <application>StorCli</application> do not work with
            &man.mrsas.4;.</para>
        </note>
 
-       <para revision="266608">Fixed accounting of 
<literal>BIO_FLUSH</literal> operation
-         in &man.geom.8; <literal>GEOM_DISK</literal> class</para>
-
-       <para revision="266610">The &man.gstat.8;
-         utility now has a <literal>-o</literal> option, to
-         display "other" operatins (e.g. <literal>BIO_FLUSH</literal>).</para>
+       <para revision="266608">Fixed accounting of
+         <literal>BIO_FLUSH</literal> operation in &man.geom.8;
+         <literal>GEOM_DISK</literal> class</para>
+
+       <para revision="266610">The &man.gstat.8; utility now has
+         a <literal>-o</literal> option, to display "other" operatins
+         (e.g. <literal>BIO_FLUSH</literal>).</para>
 
        <para revision="267084">The &man.mfi.4; driver has been
          updated to include support for unmapped I/O.</para>
@@ -638,8 +642,9 @@
          updated with various vendor-supplied bug fixes.</para>
 
        <para revision="270130" contrib="sponsor"
-         sponsor="&citrix.rd;">Support for unmapped I/O has been added
-         to the &man.xen.4; <literal>blkfront</literal> driver.</para>
+         sponsor="&citrix.rd;">Support for unmapped I/O has been
+         added to the &man.xen.4; <literal>blkfront</literal>
+         driver.</para>
 
        <para revision="259328" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ff;">The
          &man.geom.8; <literal>label</literal> class is now aware of
@@ -654,15 +659,15 @@
          it easier to resize the size of a mirror when all of its
          components have been replaced.</para>
 
-       <para revision="262967">Support for MegaRAID Fury cards has been
-         added to the &man.mfi.4; driver.</para>
+       <para revision="262967">Support for MegaRAID Fury cards has
+         been added to the &man.mfi.4; driver.</para>
 
        <para revision="263024">The &man.aacraid.4; driver has been
          updated to version 3.2.5.</para>
 
-       <para revision="265536">The <literal>GEOM_VINUM</literal> option
-         is now able to be built both directly into the kernel or as
-         a &man.kldload.8; loadable module.</para>
+       <para revision="265536">The <literal>GEOM_VINUM</literal>
+         option is now able to be built both directly into the kernel
+         or as a &man.kldload.8; loadable module.</para>
 
        <para revision="265912">The &man.geom.8;
          <literal>GEOM_PART</literal> class has been updated to
@@ -689,33 +694,40 @@
          recalculate the user-specified offset and size for alignment
          with the disk geometry.</para>
 
-       <para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Many improvements to the
-         CAM Target Layer (CTL):</para>
+       <para contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">Many improvements to
+         the CAM Target Layer (CTL):</para>
        <itemizedlist>
          <listitem>
-           <para>Support for <literal>UNMAP</literal>, <literal>WRITE 
SAME</literal>, <literal>COMPARE AND WRITE</literal>, <literal>XCOPY</literal>
-               and some other SCSI commands was added to support VMWare VAAI
-               and Microsoft ODX storage acceleration.</para>
+           <para>Support for <literal>UNMAP</literal>, <literal>WRITE
+               SAME</literal>, <literal>COMPARE AND WRITE</literal>,
+             <literal>XCOPY</literal> and some other SCSI commands
+             was added to support VMWare VAAI and Microsoft ODX
+             storage acceleration.</para>
          </listitem>
          <listitem>
-           <para 
revision="265642"><literal>READ</literal>/<literal>WRITE</literal> size 
limitations were removed
-               by supporting multiple data moves per command.</para>
+           <para revision="265642">The
+             <literal>READ</literal>/<literal>WRITE</literal> size
+             limitations were removed by supporting multiple
+             data moves per command.</para>
          </listitem>
          <listitem>
            <para revision="268556">Finer-grained per-LUN locking and
-               multiple worker threads for better <acronym>SMP</acronym> 
scapability.</para>
+             multiple worker threads for better
+             <acronym>SMP</acronym> scapability.</para>
          </listitem>
          <listitem>
-           <para revision="269297">Memory consumption reduced by several
-               times by disabling some never used functionality.</para>
+           <para revision="269297">Memory consumption reduced by
+             several times by disabling some never used
+             functionality.</para>
          </listitem>
          <listitem>
            <para revision="269298">The maximum number of
-               <acronym>SCSI</acronym> ports increased from 32 to 128</para>
+             <acronym>SCSI</acronym> ports increased from 32 to
+             128</para>
          </listitem>
          <listitem>
-           <para revision="269429">Improved <literal>zvol</literal> 
integration for better
-               performance.</para>
+           <para revision="269429">Improved <literal>zvol</literal>
+             integration for better performance.</para>
          </listitem>
        </itemizedlist>
       </sect3>
@@ -724,10 +736,10 @@
        <title>File Systems</title>
 
        <para revision="260338">The
-         <literal>vfs.zfs.zio.use_uma</literal> &man.sysctl.8; has been
-         re-enabled.  On multi-CPU machines with enough RAM, this can
-         easily double &man.zfs.8; performance or reduce CPU usage in
-         half.  It was originally disabled due to memory and
+         <literal>vfs.zfs.zio.use_uma</literal> &man.sysctl.8; has
+         been re-enabled.  On multi-CPU machines with enough RAM,
+         this can easily double &man.zfs.8; performance or reduce CPU
+         usage in half.  It was originally disabled due to memory and
          <acronym>KVA</acronym> exhaustion problem reports, which
          should be resolved due to several change in the VM
          subsystem.</para>
@@ -1244,9 +1256,9 @@
       (and snapshots of the various security branches) are supported
       using the &man.freebsd-update.8; utility.  The binary upgrade
       procedure will update unmodified userland utilities, as well as
-      unmodified <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel distributed as a part of 
an
-      official &os; release.  The &man.freebsd-update.8; utility
-      requires that the host being upgraded have Internet
+      unmodified <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel distributed as
+      a part of an official &os; release.  The &man.freebsd-update.8;
+      utility requires that the host being upgraded have Internet
       connectivity.</para>
 
     <para>Source-based upgrades (those based on recompiling the &os;
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