Hi Ketan,




Thanks for your quick reply and the detailed suggestions. They look good 
overall. We'll incorporate them in next update and upload once the submission 
window opens.




Best regards,




Weiqiang








        



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 主题: Re: [spring] Re: Ketan Talaulikar's Discuss on 
draft-ietf-spring-dhc-distribute-srv6-locator-dhcp-13:(with DISCUSS and COMMENT)


Hi Weiqiang,
It seems like some of my comments were skipped over. Please check below. It 
would be great if you can share the diff of the proposed changes (or via github 
or any other way) so we can converge on this quickly.

1) (problem with new text - not from my comments)  Section 5.2.

After obtaining the SRv6 Locator assigned by the DHCPv6 server, how to assign 
local SRv6 SIDs based on this SRv6 Locator, how to use multiple assigned SRv6 
Locators, and how to advertise these SRv6 SIDs to the rest of the network are 
not within the scope of this document. In certain scenarios where multiple 
allocations are required—for example, when supporting the allocation of 
multiple SRv6 compressed Locators [RFC9800], or when SRv6 Locators for SRv6 VPN 
services need to be assigned separately—the allocation policy between the 
DHCPv6 client and DHCPv6 server MUST be consistent.

I am not following the reference to RFC9800 here and the multiple SRv6 
compressed Locator. Is there such a thing as "SRv6 compressed locators"? Aren't 
they just SRv6 Locators? I would suggest the following for the new text in bold 
above that was introduced. I don't know if this satisfies the person that you 
made these changes for (I have not checked all the threads), but at least you 
don't introduce/use wrong terms.

However, in certain scenarios where multiple allocations are required (e.g., 
when multiple SRv6 Locators for say best-effort and low latency services with 
different algo are needed), the allocation policy between the DHCPv6 client and 
DHCPv6 server needs to be consistent.
 
2) (problem with new text - not from my comments) Section 5.3. Again, I am not 
aware of the discussion but the text does not make sense.

CURRENT
Note that the configuration behavior of the server and client SHOULD be 
consistent (e.g., "Clients and Servers new assign a single locator unless 
explicitly configured").

PERHAPS
Note that the configuration behavior of the server and client SHOULD be 
consistent (e.g., "Clients and Servers assign a single locator unless 
explicitly configured").


3) You missed my comment for section 4.2 
KT> Can LB-Len + LN-Len be zero? Can SRv6 locator be a default route :: ? If 
not then the minimum should be 1 octet and hence LB-Len + LN-Len cannot be 
zero. Am I right?

To make it easier for you, let me suggest the following and let me know if I am 
missing something.

CURRENT
SRv6-Locator: 0–16 octets. 

SUGGEST
SRv6-Locator: 1–16 octets. 


CURRENT
The sum of LB-Len, LN-Len, Fun-Len, and Arg-Len MUST NOT exceed 128 bits. If 
the sum exceeds 128 bits, the IA_SRV6_LOCATOR option MUST be marked as invalid, 
and the remainder of the message SHOULD be processed as if the packet did not 
include this option.

SUGGEST
The sum of LB-Len, LN-Len, Fun-Len, and Arg-Len MUST NOT exceed 128 bits. The 
sum of LB-Len and LN-Len MUST NOT be zero. If either of these conditions are 
violated, the IA_SRV6_LOCATOR option MUST be marked as invalid, and the 
remainder of the message SHOULD be processed as if the packet did not include 
this option.


I hope this helps us close quickly.

In the meantime, I am clearing my DISCUSS ballot since those points have been 
addressed.

Thanks,
Ketan




On Tue, Mar 3, 2026 at 4:38PM Weiqiang Cheng <[email protected]> 
wrote:
 Hi Ketan,



Thanks a lot for your comments.



We’ve just uploaded the new version of 
draft-ietf-spring-dhc-distribute-srv6-locator-dhcp-15.



In response to your comments, the key updates are as follows:
1. The references to CPE and BRAS in Section 9 have been updated to be generic 
to DHCPv6 roles.
2. For non-zero flex-algo, some explanation text has been added.


Best regards,

Weiqiang Cheng

 


From: Ketan Talaulikar
Date: 2026-02-17 23:09
To: han
CC: The IESG aretana.ietf buraglio 
draft-ietf-spring-dhc-distribute-srv6-locator-dhcp spring-chairs spring
Subject: [spring] Re: Ketan Talaulikar's Discuss on 
draft-ietf-spring-dhc-distribute-srv6-locator-dhcp-13: (with DISCUSS and 
COMMENT)


Hi Ruibo,
Thanks for posting the update and the responses. Please check inline below for 
a few follow-up with KT.

Please consider the issues without follow-up as been addressed.




On Fri, Feb 13, 2026 at 11:02PM han <[email protected]> wrote:
 
Dear Ketan,

 
Thanks for your review and valuable comments., and we uploaded version 14 
according to your suggestions. 

 
Please find our responses inline below.

 
And please let us know if you have any further comments.

 
Best regards,

 
Ruibo

  

  

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 DISCUSS:

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 Thanks to the authors and the WG for their work on this document.

  

 I have a few points that I would like to discuss.

  

 <discuss-1> Section 3

  

 180     However, due to the following reasons, it is difficult to achieve

 181     these requirements currently.

  

 183     *  The configuration is very complex.

  

 185        In a Metro network, the number of CPEs is very large and widely

 186        distributed geographically.  Moreover, the mobility requirements

 187        of CPEs are relatively high, and the access location of the same

 188        CPE often changes, so its IPv6 address cannot be fixed.

  

 190        At present, an SRv6 Locator can only be configured on each CPE

 191        through a controller or the Command Line Interface (CLI), which

 192        increases the configuration complexity.

  

 194     *  SRv6 Locator routes cannot be dynamically distributed.

  

 196        A CPE can be connected to the BRAS of local MAN through various

 197        types of networks, such as leased line, optical fiber, etc.  Due

 198        to the diversity of connections, IGP is usually only enabled

 199        within the MAN, that is, IGP will not be deployed between CPE and

 200        BRAS.

  

 202        As a result, the SRv6 Locator route of CPE cannot be distributed

 203        to the BRAS node through IGP, and the static route can only be

 204        configured manually on the BRAS or the controller.  Configuring

 205        routes to the CPE on the BRAS increases the cost and workload of

 206        communication and coordination.

  

 The first bullet disregards automation. It ignores that

 there are several ways of "provisioning" that remove the complexity. This

 argument also ignores the part that allocation of SRv6 Locators via DHCPv6

 alone is not sufficient and there is still the part of SRv6 Policy provisioning

 along with other things to get steering over them working.

  

 About the second bullet, it is obvious that IGPs are not enabled towards

 broadband CPEs. However, static route is not the only way for injecting 
customer

 routes behind the CPE from the BRAS into the provider network. BRAS

 implementations can have other route producers as well - this is a local and

 implementation specific matter.

  

 I can understand the obvious attraction of using the same DHCPv6 for the

 provisioning/allocation of customer IPv6 addresses as well as the SRv6 Locator

 to simplify operations and align with existing allocation techniques/mechanism

 that are already operational in these networks. But I find all the above

 justifications/reasons to not hold much weight. Could you reconsider updating

 the motivation?

  

 [Co-authors]Thanks, we updated it in chapter 3 of version 14.

  

 <discuss-2> Section 5

  

 501     For the advertisement of SRv6 locator routes, if the DHCP Relay or

 502     DHCP Server device that assigns SRv6 Locators to CPEs is also a BRAS

 503     device, it MAY locally advertise the CPE's SRv6 Locator route via the

 504     IGP, enabling other SRv6 nodes to obtain the CPE's SRv6 Locator

 505     route.

  

 When redistributing the SRv6 Locator routes via IGPs, I assume that

 they are advertised via the respective OSPF and IS-IS SRv6 Locator reachability

 advertisements. I believe this is important to specify with reference to those

 IGP RFCs. Further, when it comes to IGPs, there is also the algo associated 
with

 the locators which is not covered by this spec. Does that mean, locators 
allocated

 via DHCP belong only to the default algo 0? Or is there a plan to introduce 
algo

 in the DHCP signaling as well? Regardless, would be good to clarify in this

 document. But then they can be also advertised via BGP where there is no

 distinction between SRv6 Locators and other IPv6 Prefix reachability (also no

 algo).

  

 [Co-authors] We added new fields about Flex-Algo in the new option in chapter 
4.2 of version 14.





KT> Thanks. Section 5.5 needs to explain that the reachability for the SRv6 
Locators with non-zero Algo have to be advertised as Locators - refer RFC9352 
and RFC9513 for the specific TLV/LSA to be used. Those also need to be added as 
references. For Algo zero they can be advertised as normal prefix 
reachabilities.
 


  

 <discuss-3> Section 5.2

  

 511     As shown in Figure 5, when a BRAS device (functioning as a DHCP relay

 512     or DHCP server) receives an SRv6 Locator allocation request from a

 513     client, it MAY assign an SRv6 Locator to the client and install a

 514     corresponding SRv6 Locator route locally.  The next hop of this route

 515     SHOULD point to the requesting client.  Through this route, the BRAS

 516     can access the Host under the CPE, while the BRAS MAY then advertise

 517     this route via traditional routing protocols (e.g., an IGP) to allow

 518     other routers to learn it.

  

 520     Upon receiving an SRv6 Locator release request from the client, the

 521     BRAS MUST release the allocated SRv6 Locator, remove the local SRv6

 522     Locator route, and withdraw the previously advertised SRv6 Locator

 523     route via the IGP.

  

 525     Client---------------BRAS(Relay/Server)-------------Router

 526     Alloc Locator  -->  Add SRv6 locator route

 527                         Advertise SRv6 Locator route -->

 528     Release Locator-->  Del SRv6 locator route

 529                         Withdraw SRv6 Locator route  -->

 530                    Figure 5: Advertisement of SRv6 Locator Route

  

 The mechanism introduced in this document is a generic DHCPv6 feature.

 I can understand the use of the BRAS example as a motivation but this applies

 to several other deployment designs - e.g., SD-WAN, SRv6 Locator allocations to

 hosts in an operator's DC, etc. As such, it is important to abstract the 
normative

 and procedural text in section 5 from the BRAS-specific example. Can't the

 procedures about route advertisement and programming be specified in a manner

 that is not tied to BRAS?

  

 [Co-authors] Thanks for this useful suggestion, we changed the scenario which 
is not tied to BRAS in version 14.




 

 <discuss-4> Section 5.5

  

 657     on the CPE's directly connected router.  This deployment assumes that

 658     all relevant components shown in Figure 6 belong to a single trusted

 659     SR domain.

  

 661                   Client        DHCP Relay   DHCPv6 Server

 662     +------+     +------+       +------+     +-----------+

 663     | Host +-----+ CPE  +-------+Router+-----+    BRAS   |

 664     +------+     +------+       +--+---+     +-----------+

 665                                    |

 666                                    |

 667                             +------+-----+

 668                             |  Backbone  |

 669                             |  Network   |

 670                             +------------+

 671                Figure 6: CPE accessed through DHCP relay

  

 What is meant by "relevant components"? Are Hosts a part of this?

 Why only for the components in this Figure? Is it not applicable for the

 others deployments (w/o a relay)? Also consider abstracting from the

 BRAS-specific example - a more generic/normative way to say this would be

 that the DHCP client, server, and relay all lie within the SR domain.

  

 Please move/consolidate all these considerations and definitions of what

 lies within the SR domain in the Security Considerations section.

 Note that some of such text already exists but is wrongly placed under

 Privacy Considerations.

  

 Text about DHCP not having encryption is already covered in the security

 considerations section but that is not connected to the risks by this new

 extension. E.g. Could the customer/home user snoop DHCPv6 packets on CPE's

 link to the provider and learn the SRv6 SIDs/Locator of the provider in a

 home broadband scenario? What risks does that bring up? And then clarify

 their mitigation as indicated by the best practices in section 5.1 of

 RFC8754 (this is also touched upon but in section 9). The point is that

 the CPE is now the border node (in the BRAS example) and it needs to have

 the filtering abilities on internal/external interfaces as per RFC8754.

  

 
[Co-authors]Thanks, we updated chapter 9, please let us know if you have any 
further comments.




KT> Thanks. However, there are references to CPE and BRAS in section 9 that 
also need to be generalized for DHCPv6 roles.
 




  

  

 ----------------------------------------------------------------------

 COMMENT:

 ----------------------------------------------------------------------

  

 Please find below some comments on this document inline in the idnits output of

 v13. Lookout for the <EoRv13> tag at the end to ensure you are seeing the full

 review.

  

 90         SR can be instantiated on the IPv6 data plane through the use of the

 91         Segment Routing Header (SRH) defined in [RFC8754].  SR instantiation

 92         on the IPv6 data plane is referred to as SRv6.

  

 <major> Strictly speaking SRH is not required for realization of SRv6. It is

 only required when there is more than one segment and then we also have CSID.

 Please consider rephrasing.

 [Co-authors] Thanks, we added more descriptions in version 14.

  

 129        are part of a single trusted SR domain.  The IP network customer

 130        provider edge (CPE) must be managed by the operator providing

 131        services or by a trusted partner.

  

 <minor> Does it affect the document if the "trusted partner" part is removed?

 [Co-authors] Thanks, we added more descriptions in chapter3 of version 14.

  

 167        In this network, operators hope to achieve interconnection between

 168        access users through End-to-End SRv6 tunnels.  Taking the service

 169        traffic from Host1 to Host2 as an example, CPE1 is the SRv6 ingress

 170        node and CPE2 is the SRv6 egress node.  The SRv6 Locator should be

  

 <minor> End-to-End would perhaps mean host to host. Please consider rephrasing

 to clarify that SRv6 is CPE to CPE.

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we changed it to CPE-to-CPE in version 14..

  

 171        configured on the CPEs.  Other devices in the network learn the SRv6

 172        Locator routes of the CPEs.

  

 <minor> By "network" you mean the SP network and not the home network. Please

 clarify.

 [Co-authors] Thanks, we added more descriptions in version 14.

  

 174        At the same time, SRv6 policies need to be configured on CPEs to

 175        steer the service traffic between CPEs to the specified SRv6

 176        forwarding path.  The SRv6 policy can be manually configured

 177        statically or issued through the controller, and its specific

 178        configuration method is out of the scope of this document.

  

 <major> I am guessing this is about "provisioning" of SR Policies. This term

 includes local configuration on the CPE (via CLI, NETCONF/YANG, APIs, etc.)

 or signaling via a protocol from a controller. Please clarify.

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we changed “The SRv6 policy can be manually configured 
statically” to “The SRv6 policy can be manually configured statically (via 
command-line interface (CLI), NETCONF, YANG, APIs, etc.)”.

  

 280        An IA_SRV6_LOCATOR option may only appear in the options area of a

 281        DHCP message.  A DHCP message may contain multiple IA_SRV6_LOCATOR

 282        Options (though each must have a unique IAID).

  

 <major> Isn't the use of MAY and MUST appropriate here since it impacts

 interoperability (e.g., error handling when the uniqueness check fails).

 In general, I found there to be a few places where the use of BCP14 keywords

 would be appropriate instead of their lowercase usage - I will leave it to

 the authors' call.

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we check it in RFC 9915, and found the same words are 
used.

  

 382           -  SRv6-Locator: 0-16 octets.  This field encodes the SRv6

 383              Locator.  The SRv6 Locator is encoded in the minimal number of

 384              octets for the given number of bits.  Trailing bits MUST be 
set

 385              to zero and ignored when received.

  

 <major> What is "the given number of bits"? Please merge the sentence below 
into

 this field description for clarity. Perhaps:

  

 "The SRv6 Locator is encoded in the minimal number of octets for the SRv6 SID

 Locator length that is LB-Len plus LN-Len."

  

 Then please add validation for these two length fields. Can one or both of them

 be non-zero?

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we updated it in version 14.





KT> Can LB-Len + LN-Len be zero? Can SRv6 locator be a default route :: ? If 
not then the minimum should be 1 octet and hence LB-Len + LN-Len cannot be 
zero. Am I right?

Thanks,
Ketan

 


  

 387           -  IALocator-Options: Options associated with this SRv6 Locator.

 388              A variable-length field (determined by subtracting the length

 389              of the SRv6-Locator from the Option-Len minus 12).  The Status

 390              code "NoSRv6LocatorAvail" indicate the server has no locators

 391              available to assign to the IA_SRv6_LOCATOR(s).

  

 <question> I am not a DHCP expert and I am wondering if IALocator-Options is

 a new set of options (none of which are introduced by this document) OR

 if this is a field where existing DHCP options can be conveyed. If it is the

 latter, what options are those? Can these aspects be clarified?

  [Co-authors] Yes, this draft defines two new DHCPv6 options,with two option 
values assigned by IANA, 149 and 150 (chapter 4 and chapter 8).

  

 501        For the advertisement of SRv6 locator routes, if the DHCP Relay or

 502        DHCP Server device that assigns SRv6 Locators to CPEs is also a BRAS

 503        device, it MAY locally advertise the CPE's SRv6 Locator route via 
the

 504        IGP, enabling other SRv6 nodes to obtain the CPE's SRv6 Locator

 505        route.

  

 <major> Isn't the above text already covered in the next section (5.2)? If so,

 can the above paragraph be deleted? I find there is text related to route

 processing in individual sub-sections and then also in section 5.2 which is

 needless repetition and also affects the clarity. Please pick one approach

 that is then consistently followed throughout section 5.

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we updated it in version 14.

  

 507     5.2.  Advertisement of SRv6 Locator Route

  

 <minor> If all of the route processing aspects are being consolidated in one

 sub-section then please consider moving it as the last sub-section of section 5

 after all the DHCP procedures are covered.

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we updated it in version 14.

  

 569        After obtaining the SRv6 Locator assigned by the DHCPv6 server, how

 570        to assign local SRv6 SIDs based on this SRv6 Locator, how to use

 571        multiple assigned SRv6 Locators, and how to advertise these SRv6 
SIDs

 572        to the rest of the network are not within the scope of this 
document.

 573        If the client uses the assigned SRv6 Locator to configure local SRv6

 574        SIDs, the preferred and valid lifetimes of those SRv6 Locators MUST

 575        NOT be longer than the remaining preferred and valid lifetimes

 576        respectively for the assigned SRv6 Locator at any time.

  

 <major> I am not able to follow the last sentence above. Is it meant to say -

 "preferred and valid lifetimes of those SRv6 SIDs MUST NOT"? But then there

 is no leasing/allocation of SRv6 SIDs. I think I am missing something here ...

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we added more descriptions in version 14.

  

 595        DHCP allows a client to request new SRv6 Locators to be assigned by

 596        sending additional new IA_SRV6_LOCATOR options.  However, a typical

 597        operator usually prefers to assign a single, larger prefix.  In most

 598        deployments, it is recommended that the client request a larger SRv6

 599        Locator in its initial transmissions rather than request additional

 600        SRv6 Locators later on.

  

 <minor> Should that be RECOMMENDED - i.e., BCP14 keyword?

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we modified it.

  

 622        When operating as a BRAS device, the DHCPv6 server MAY install a

 623        local SRv6 Locator route pointing to the CPE and advertise this 
route

 624        via an IGP upon assigning an SRv6 Locator to the CPE.

  

 <minor> Please avoid repetition of such text in multiple sections and

 consolidate all the route processing in one section. This happens in several

 places under section 5 and so I will not point out further such instances.

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we updated it in version 14.

  

 816     9.  Privacy Considerations

  

 818        See Section 24 of [I-D.ietf-dhc-rfc8415bis] for the DHCP privacy

 819        considerations.

  

 821        The SR domain is a trusted domain, as defined in [RFC8402], Sections

 822        2 and 8.2.  Having such a well-defined trust boundary is necessary 
in

 823        order to operate SRv6-based services for internal traffic while

 824        preventing any external traffic from accessing or exploiting the

 825        SRv6-based services.  Care and rigor in IPv6 address allocation for

 826        use for SRv6 SID allocations and network infrastructure addresses, 
as

 827        distinct from IPv6 addresses allocated for end users and systems (as

 828        illustrated in Section 5.1 of [RFC8754]), can provide the clear

 829        distinction between internal and external address space that is

 830        required to maintain the integrity and security of the SRv6 Domain.

  

 832        When assigning SRv6 Locators to SRv6 Segment Endpoint Nodes using

 833        DHCPv6 as specified in this document, CPEs and BRAS devices MUST

 834        operate within a single trusted SR domain.

  

 <major> The above two paragraphs are not privacy but security considerations?

  [Co-authors] Thanks, we changed it to security considerations in version 14.

  

 895     11.2.  Informative References

  

 897        [RFC8754]  Filsfils, C., Ed., Dukes, D., Ed., Previdi, S., Leddy, 
J.,

 898                   Matsushima, S., and D. Voyer, "IPv6 Segment Routing 
Header

 899                   (SRH)", RFC 8754, DOI 10.17487/RFC8754, March 2020,

 900                   <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8754>.

  

 <major> This should be normative reference due to the security considerations.

 
[Co-authors]Thanks, we updated the references, please let us know if you have 
any further comments.

  

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