Hi Jim, Thank you for the review and comments.
I just uploaded a new version addressing your comments. On this one: 396 o may be pre-computed. 398 o may be pre-programmed. 400 o may have to be disjoint. Jim> Should the above bullet points be normative language e.g, s/may/MAY I don’t think we need normative language there. Those bullets are simply a summary of the details covered later. But, through your comment I realised in the "1:1 Protection" section we were missing a sentence at the beginning saying "The second candidate path MUST be computed disjoint to the first candidate path” … I added that now https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-spring-cs-sr-policy-13#name-11-protection Regards Christian On 03.12.2025, at 17:06, James Guichard <[email protected]> wrote: Dear Authors, Thank you for this document. I have only minor edits/comments as follows: Checking references for intended status: Informational ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- == Outdated reference: A later version (-11) exists of draft-ietf-pce-circuit-style-pcep-extensions-09 == Outdated reference: A later version (-19) exists of draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-16 Jim> Please update the above references. 122 irrespective of changing network utilization other services Jim> s/other services/from other services. 135 architecture [RFC8402] together with a centralised controller such as Jim> s/centralised/centralized 219 ensure SLA compliance for the live of the CS-SR Policy. Jim> s/live/life 234 * When using configuration, a appropriate YANG model such as Jim> s/a/an 291 4.1. Managing Bandwidth 293 In a network, resources are represented by links of certain 294 bandwidth. In a circuit switched network such as SONET/SDH, OTN or 295 DWDM resources (timeslots or a wavelength) are allocated for a Jim> Please expand SONET/SDH, OTN and DWDM as none of these are well-known abbreviations as per https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=abbrev_list 299 be sent. This allows for the total reservations to exceed the link 300 bandwidth as well in general for link congestion. Jim> Please correct the last sentence above. “As well in general for link congestion” does not make sense. 329 * Allocate a dedicated Diffserv codepoint to map traffic of CS-SR Jim> Please provide a reference for Diffserv. 396 o may be pre-computed. 398 o may be pre-programmed. 400 o may have to be disjoint. Jim> Should the above bullet points be normative language e.g, s/may/MAY 491 A and Z to initiate the candiate paths of the CS-SR Policy by sending Jim> s/candiate/candidate 556 signaling mechanism available.. Jim> s/../. Jim
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