Hi Mohamed,




Thank you for your thorough comments. They are greatly appreciated. 


Apologies for the delay in responding. Originally, we aimed to revise the draft 
promptly. However, upon review, we39ve found that additional time is necessary 
to complete the required modifications. We are actively working on this and 
will finalize it as soon as possible. Your patience is sincerely appreciated.


We anticipate that the updated version will address your concerns. We look 
forward to potentially presenting it at the upcoming IETF meeting for further 
discussion based on the revised content.





Best Regards,


Liyan

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Hi Liyan, all,


 


Thank you for sharing this version


 


I don’t think that the document is ready for adoption (yet).


 


I think that before diving into technicalities how to glue various slice levels 
with specific techniques, we need a better understanding on the actual 
use/need.  For example, the cases mentioned in the draft can be handled by 
managing separate network services, not binding them artificially to a parent 
slice service. Also, if recursion is needed, then architectural considerations 
require to be worked out first. For  example, (1) it is not clear from the 
current text how to map the RFC9543 scope into low-levels (PE/CE roles, etc.), 
(2) whether/why preserving top-level marking is needed when traveling in 
low-levels, (3) the requirements imposed on NRP mappings may not be  easy to 
implement because forwarding nodes don’t have access to the parent slice 
service, etc. Let alone that Flex-Algo alone is not sufficient to realize a 
slice if not jointly deployed with other techniques (please see 
draft-ietf-teas-5g-ns-ip-mpls).





There is also some confusion (at least in my mind) about some of the NRP use in 
the draft. Some of it is more like a filtered topology while some other use  of 
network slice is more about connectivity constructs of a slice.


 


FWIW, you can find more comments at 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/2024/draft-gong-spring-hierarchical-slice-solution-00-rev%20Med.doc


 


Hope this helps.


 


Cheers,


Med


 




De : Liyan Gong <gongli...@chinamobile.com> Envoyé : lundi 17 juin 2024 10:17 À 
: spring <spring@ietf.org> teas <t...@ietf.org> spring-chairs 
<spring-cha...@ietf.org> teas-chairs <teas-cha...@ietf.org> Objet : [Teas] 
Fw:New Version Notification for 
draft-gong-spring-hierarchical-slice-solution-00.txt




 

Dear All,

 

We have uploaded a new version of the document 
"draft-gong-spring-hierarchical-slice-solution".

 

This draft introduces a hierarchical slice solution leveraging SRv6 technology 
which can be applied to the typical single-industry multi-user slicing scenario.

 

It has been presented to the SPRING and TEAS working groups, and we greatly 
appreciate all the valuable feedback received. 

 

Based on this input, we have incorporated updates into the document.

 

To prevent further confusion, we have renamed the draft to 
"draft-gong-spring-hierarchical-slice-solution" (replacing 
"draft-gong-teas-hierarchical-slice-solution").

 

We kindly request your consideration for adoption in the SPRING WG. 

 

Any additional comments or suggestions to enhance the document are highly 
encouraged and appreciated.

 

Best Regards,

Liyan

 

 


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