I look forward to seeing a draft with these changes.

Yours,

Joel


On 8/9/2023 2:43 AM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote:
Dear Joel,

Thank you for sharing your comments. We would like to address each of your points as follows:

Firstly, we will explicitly state that the CPE must be operator-managed in the text.

Secondly, we understand your reservations about the assumption of multi-operator trust domains. We will only cover the situations where different arms of the same company operate their portions of the network separately but trust each other.

Lastly, we appreciate your suggestion to rephrase the text accompanying Figure 1 to make it an active statement about the requirement for all relevant components to be part of a single trust domain. We will update the text accordingly.

Once again, thank you for bringing these comments.

Best regards,

Weiqiang



    *From:* Joel Halpern <mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com>
    *Date:* 2023-08-08 22:27
    *To:* Weiqiang Cheng <mailto:chengweiqi...@chinamobile.com>;
    spring <mailto:spring@ietf.org>
    *Subject:* Re: [spring] FW: New Version Notification for
    draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt

    I have three concerns with this.  The first concern is that I do
    not see where the text is explicit that the CPE MUST be
    operator-managed.   That seems to me to be necessary no matter
    what one assumes about operator relationships.


    The second concern is about the assumption of multi-operator trust
    domains.  If by that you mean a situation where multiple arms of
    the same company operate their portions of the network separately,
    but trust each other, then yes, I understand how that can be a
    single trust domain. However, that is a single operator, not
    multi-operator.  I have never seen any siutation in which actually
    distinct operators trust each other and trust each other's
    security mechanisms enough to be treated as a single trust
    domain.   And what little text we have defining trust domains does
    not suggest such an interpretation.  I am not comfortable with
    that, and I would expect pushback when we as a WG tried to publish
    the document if we made such an assertion.


    Third, as a lesser matter, I would prefer if the text that went
    with figure one started with "This deployment assumes that all of
    the relevvent componenbts in figure one are part of a single trust
    domain".  That is an active statement about a requirement by this
    document, not a passive observation.


    Yours,

    Joel


    On 8/7/2023 10:01 PM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote:
    Hi Joel,
    Thank you very much for your comments.
    I agree that all network elements, such as BRAS, CRx, Backbone,
    and CPE, belong to the same operator, and this scenario indeed
    constitutes a trusted domain. However, a trusted domain can
    indeed extend beyond a single operator. In cases where multiple
    operators authenticate and trust each other's network
    infrastructure, they can form a collective trusted domain. This
    allows them to collaborate and leverage the resources of multiple
    trusted operators when providing services. It is important to
    consider such scenarios and ensure that the concept of a trusted
    domain is flexible enough to accommodate diverse network
    environments.

    How about if the author were to include text similar to the
    following:

    "While in this document we describe a trusted domain consisting
    of network elements from the same operator, it is important to
    note that a trusted domain is not necessarily limited to a single
    operator. In the real world, multiple operators can establish
    mutual trust, authenticate each other's network infrastructure,
    and form a collective trusted domain. In such cases, they can
    collaborate and leverage the resources of multiple trusted
    operators to provide services. Therefore, we encourage readers to
    maintain flexibility in understanding the concept of a trusted
    domain and consider the possibilities of cooperation and trust
    among different operators."

    Including such text would provide a clearer expression of the
    author's understanding of the concept of a trusted domain and
    remind readers to consider the potential for cooperation and
    trust among multiple operators in practical applications.

    B.R.
    Weiqiang

        *From:* Joel Halpern <mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com>
        *Date:* 2023-08-07 22:10
        *To:* Weiqiang Cheng <mailto:chengweiqi...@chinamobile.com>;
        spring <mailto:spring@ietf.org>
        *Subject:* Re: [spring] FW: New Version Notification for
        draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt

        For now speaking personally, although this may require
        chairs' intervention, I do not find the trust domain text to
        be sufficient.   While I am not sure it would suffice, I
        would expect the text that goes with figure 1 to explicitly
        state both that the CPE are under operator control and that
        the BRAS, CRx, and Backbone devices are all run by a single
        operator that is the same as the operator managing the CPE. 
        And that they form a trust domain or are all part of a single
        larger trust domain.


        Yours,

        Joel


        On 8/7/2023 3:08 AM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote:
        Dear Chairs and Group,

        Wehave updated the draft and addressed the comments received
        during the adoption call.

        The main updates include:

         1. 1) Adding a detailed description of the trusted domain
            in the Security Considerations section.
         2. 2) Optimizing the text based on the received comments.


        For a detailed overview of the changes, please refer to the
        following diff link:

        
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01

        If you have any further comments or feedback, please feel
        free to share.



        B.R.
        Weiqiang Cheng

            *From:* internet-drafts <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>
            *Date:* 2023-08-07 14:46
            *To:* Changwang Lin <mailto:linchangwang.04...@h3c.com>;
            Geng Zhang <mailto:zhangg...@chinamobile.com>; Ruibo Han
            <mailto:hanru...@chinamobile.com>; Weiqiang Cheng
            <mailto:chengweiqi...@chinamobile.com>; Yuanxiang Qiu
            <mailto:qiuyuanxi...@h3c.com>
            *Subject:* New Version Notification for
            draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
            A new version of I-D,
            draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
            has been successfully submitted by Ruibo Han and posted
            to the
            IETF repository.
            Name: draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp
            Revision: 01
            Title: Distribute SRv6 Locator by DHCP
            Document date: 2023-08-07
            Group: Individual Submission
            Pages: 16
            URL:
            
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
            Status:
            
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp/
            Htmlized:
            
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp
            Diff:
            
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01
            Abstract:
               In a SRv6 network, each SRv6 Segment Endpoint Node
            must be assigned
               a locator, and segment IDs are generated within the
            address space of
               this locator. This document describes a method for
            assigning
               locators to SRv6 Segment Endpoint Nodes through DHCPv6.
            The IETF Secretariat
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