Working Group,

I support adopting this document.

However I have one question; if it leads to (very small) changes in the document, this can be done after the adoption.

I'm looking at

   HMAC-SHA: Consists of two parts
   HMAC: Hashed Message Authentication Code (expanded in the document).
   SHA: Secure Hash Algorithm (not expanded, but on the other hand it an
        well-known abbreviation)

When we combine two abbreviations what rules apply, is it enough that eachpart is expanded "somewhere" even if the parts are found at different places. Or does the rule "expand at first occurrence apply?

I guess that in part this depends on whether we view HMAC-SHA as one unit or two separate parts? And how familiar we believe our readers are with the abbreviations.

I don't have a strong opinion on this, but would suggest that we place
HMAC-SHA in the "Abbreviations" in section 2.2 and expamnd it fully.

On 30/10/2020 10:01, Chengli (Cheng Li) wrote:
Hi WG,

Support. However, there are some encoding format changes among versions, hope the encoding format can be stable in the following revision ASAP.

Many thanks for the authors’ contribution!

Thanks,

Cheng

*From:* spring [mailto:spring-boun...@ietf.org] *On Behalf Of *James Guichard
*Sent:* Thursday, October 22, 2020 8:52 PM
*To:* spring@ietf.org
*Cc:* ippm-cha...@ietf.org; spring-cha...@ietf.org
*Subject:* [spring] WG Adoption Call for https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gandhi-spring-twamp-srpm-11

Dear WG:

This message starts a 3 week WG adoption call for document https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gandhi-spring-twamp-srpm-11 ending November 12^th 2020. Please note that this document has several changes from v-10 that were requested by the SPRING and IPPM chairs. For this reason, the chairs have extended the adoption call for an additional week to allow the WG enough time to review these changes before deciding on WG adoption.

Some background:

Several review comments were received previously for document https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gandhi-spring-twamp-srpm-10. The SPRING and IPPM chairs considered those comments, and upon review of this version of the document, determined the following:

  * The SPRING document should describe only the procedures relevant to
    SPRING with pointers to non-SPRING document/s that define any
    extensions. Several extensions including*Control Code Field
    Extension for TWAMP Light Messages*, *Loss Measurement Query Message
    Extensions*, and *Loss Measurement Response Message Extensions *were
    included in
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gandhi-spring-twamp-srpm-10 and
    should be removed from the SPRING document.
  * The TWAMP extensions included in
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gandhi-spring-twamp-srpm-10 should
be described in a new document published in the IPPM WG. These conclusions were discussed with the authors of https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gandhi-spring-twamp-srpm-10 the result of which is the publication of the following two documents:

  * https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gandhi-spring-twamp-srpm-11. The
    subject of this WG adoption call.
  * https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gandhi-ippm-twamp-srpm-00. This
    document will be progressed (if determined by the WG) within the
    IPPM WG.

After review of the SPRING document please indicate support (or not) for WG adoption to the mailing list. Please also provide comments/reasons for that support (or lack thereof) as silence will not be considered as consent.

Finally, the chairs would like to thank the authors for their efforts in this matter.

Thanks!

Jim, Bruno, & Joel

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